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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Grandfather's Bicycles

    Hello there. As I have said before, I will take a gander at your work. Be prepared get random mutterings from me that might not make sense. They make perfect ...

    Apr 22, 2009
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: BFBO - Removed for Editing.

    Hello there! ;D I don't quite know how to critique non-fiction, so I am going to critique almost like any other story I have read. If that is a problem, ...

    Apr 22, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Who Guillotine

    Hello there! I decided I wanted to review your poem! ;) Warning before hand. I am not a poet. I have no poetic experience, and I am a horrible poet ...

    Apr 8, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The last night

    Hello there! Just a fore-warning. I am not a qualified poem critic. I have no poetic experience so you really do not have to listen to anything I have to ...

    Apr 5, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: The Great Gatsby

    With The Great Gadsby, I enoyed at the parts when there was sadness, but I am one of those poeple who seek out the melancholy shall we say. His characters ...

    Apr 5, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Past the Horizon

    Oh dear, you have gotten a fan! I certainly looking forward to your futrue chapters. This was kind of funny, but I thought I was going crazy when I first ...

    Apr 5, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Hiding

    Hello there! Before I start my comments, I would just like to fore-warn you that I am certainly not qualified to do this. I have no poetical experience and I ...

    Apr 5, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Don't go after my heart

    Hello there. I feel like I shall review a poem! Ahem, just before you take any of my comments to heart, let me remind you I am not qualified to ...

    Apr 5, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Hidden Evil

    Hello Saphira. I do believe this is the first time we have met. I am Incognito, your critiquer today. I saw this and it peaked my attention. If I enjoy ...

    Mar 20, 2009
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Prolouge

    Wow, this does sound quite intersting. It is hard to be critical with such a short piece but I will try. There was always something about him that suggested I ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Butterfly Wings

    Hello Dreamwalker. And here I have come with my promised review that you should adore. I am reading your work! Aren't you proud? Okay, let's start. I am lazy so ...

    Mar 16, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Prone to Weakness

    Hello! I will critique your piece today. You do not have to critique mine back. It has been posted for a long time and has plenty of enough reviews. You ...

    Feb 26, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: a cruel reality

    I found your characters in the Character Tea Party quite interesting so I decided to take a look. I will also critique as I read it. I will also give ...

    Feb 21, 2009
  • Script » General, General Re: Author and Character

    I do indeed like this and I am indeed to lazy to nit-pick. I think the reason why people like this because they can connect with it making it all ...

    Feb 12, 2009
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: A Light in the Darkness (Probably needs some work!)

    Hello. I shall be your reviewer today. I feel like being idiotic. Just to let you know, I kind of critique funny so I will tell you my legend before ...

    Feb 8, 2009


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