Incandescence

bitch. in the best sense of the word.

Yeah, I explained this in the Chatroom, but the ending is intentionally brimming with foul language. As Mesh said, it detracts from the ending, which is my intent. In this ...

Ramble Ramble Ramble Blah Blah Blah. I voted for cheese.

The title actually means: Turn Away, Please, Do Not Look At Me.

Yeah, Liz, that's because Grant is Lolly's (Pogo's)...aaaah, screw it. Nevermind. But yes, that was the point.

Not your best. You seemed...careless with this piece. Sloppily construed.

On TYWC, I didn't like this. I still don't.

Soppy. This just dripped with immature strains of a romantic author. Of course, they're quite popular, but I don't like them. Oh well, maybe that's why I'll never be famous.

Hehe. If you really wanted me to shutup, you wouldn't have responded at all.

It just asked for our humble opinions. I'm not going to prove you wrong, Rei. You don't like me, I don't like you. So, until we settle our immature differences, ...

I like this somewhat as a short story. I don't see how it can be a novel though.

Rhyming poems and myself do not mix well. Actually, I liked "My Cat Eats Cat Food" on TYWC, but this would only go good to a JLo song.

"This goes to pot that not nature doth call." Brilliant line, Mr. Taylor. And it applies to me, I suppose. You see, this is why I don't post my revisions ...

Take this as you will, but this reflected, and did so quite well, the fact that you are 13.

This was on TYWC. I still don't like it.