InTheTrees

You reminded me of the whole Invisible Children thing, but I still really like this poem. The line "The ones standing in the street, the ones saving your lives" was ...

This is sweet. The ending paragraphs are so powerful.

Thank you so much! I feel like I'm finally discovering my style and it's such a great sensation. I could have over fifty poems on this site already, but I've ...

I'm not sure what to say about this. But I liked it, I did.

I can honestly find nothing I would tweak in this poem. The language is beautiful, and the whole thing has this haunting reminicent feeling. You could probably do something with ...

:) nice. I really like the stain-glass effect.

Thank you for sharing your interpretation of this poem! To be honest, I was thinking Petrarch, how he goes back to contradicting emotions like beautiful agony and such, which always ...

Thank you for the review Nargles. I don't think it's harsh at all, just honest! I have plenty of people to go easy on me, so don't worry :) Actually, ...

Thank you for bothering to read this :) I always forget punctuation, I'll try to work on that. I kind of intended Doll smile to be a name, but I ...

This is so real, it almost felt like you were reading it out loud. There was such a powerful voice in this piece, and really great visuals. The only thing ...

Thank you so much for this review! Yes, the missing "they" was a mistake, and thanks for pointing out the repitition! I was worried about handling the last stanza too ...

Great use of alliteration and description! "with silver necklaces and unlocked doors" was my favorite line. I don't think you need to nix anything, but for some of the longer ...

These are all really good, but the second to last one is my favorite. It creates a very vivid picture.