InTheTrees

Thank you very much for the feedback. I have edited it according to your suggestions. I'm not sure if I'll ever work on this enough for it to be anything, ...

Yeah, sorry about the violence. And thanks for reading :)

This is intense... At first I was a bit annoyed that it wasn't in a poetry format but I think I like it better this way... I'd love to read ...

Hello Janika! Thanks so much for bothering to review this, I'm really flattered that you didn't think anything was wrong with it. This is probably the first time that's ever ...

Beautiful imagery, She stood, (But should this be "stands"?) a pale statue of youth, burrowing naked feet into coarse grains of wet sand Charcoaled against a starless, rayless sky, a ...

Thanks! I'm working on it! There's so much I want to say in the novel but I'm still really unsure about how I'll pull it off

Should I make this longer?

The level of skill demonstrated in this piece is astounding. All of the character's personalities shine through clearly in your writing, and you have amazing descriptions. The part when you ...

Wow. This is deep. And the gory descriptions are great, feelings are literally jumping off the page. I'm jealous xD

I love this.

Sorry, I made a mistake. My bad. Anyway, this poem rocks

This is intense man. You've inspired me to put something personal up too, that I've been hiding for a long time. Stay strong.

This is halarious. And well written!

This is really beautiful. I have a lot of respect for this poem, and your style.

That's absolutely gorgeous... I'm jealous xP