Impaired

The meter is really what drew me n, in a n enchanting way that let me see the painting, the imagery is marvelous and moved at a steady solid pace ...

It's good as is, but if you truly to feel this way about your writing, empty and hollow and useless in a sense, then I give imagery. The poem is ...

It seems t show a double desire, why complain that your pain isn't our seen while you're hiding it away in a box? I can see the poem is personal ...

I almost don't what to say, it's wonderful, the story itself was structured like a wave, slowly rising and rising and rising and then roaring back down until it slinks ...

You're living the most when you're hurt is the philosophy behind this I'm guessing? It couldn't be more or less true, because the pain of the hurt and the mind ...

The idea has a lot of potential and there are many many directions you could go with it, he could succeed, fail, keep those options open and don't let it ...

Writer's block can be the mother of the silliest and the most beautiful things. Now I can't say this is one of those beautiful mind blowing pieces, but it made ...

I love the decriptiveness and the imagery you put into this, staring into the face a creature who was born of beauty, wrapped in the blanket of the night sky, ...

I like this piece a lot, and the way It describes music, not just as an art, but as something that helps take away the sender king of heartache, like ...

It is sweet and it is sad and it is heartfelt, keep this in its rawest form. Because like this it sings of a pleading and it whispers of care. ...

How quickly time does pass, and this poem encaptures it wonderfully. I like how you entwined the old wedding rhyme into as well. It seems almost storyline, without a certain ...

I love the idea behind it, permits for death, it's interesting really, and I loved the solution to fine those who had killed themselves, because it is that kind of ...