You only hear the music

I freaking love this!!!!!!!!!
this expressis how i am
i will forever more remember this poem
it is epic and totaly awesome

Well, its very expressive. It conveys strong emotion, and the basic plot is clear: Hope in the midst of turmoil. A few more details, not so many that they take away the mystery, but a few more details would be nice. Overall, it leaves us with more questions than answers, and in my opinion, that sometimes is the best kind of poem.

I like this piece a lot, and the way It describes music, not just as an art, but as something that helps take away the sender king of heartache, like a painkiller, my advice on improvement is limited, but make it a bit clearer the role "me" is playing, a friend, an invisible, what?

I thought the word choice could have been a little more varied. "So my darling..." and "And...away" were inconsistently repeated, and that gave me a little pause as I was reading it. But maybe that's what you were trying to do, make the reader look for a pattern...

I would also have changed "You put a strong front up" to "You put up a strong front". It makes the line feel a lot more active.

Otherwise, nice poem.