ImHero

This is okay to me, because it is character development. I believe I could see this in a book of an uneducated wild man.. or a T.V show theme song. ...

Hey this ImHero for a review! I would like to start with two main things I didn't like. The first was the dad, I think his charactor could have been ...

Well, I never been on a plane but I have seen this moment expressed in a bunch of movies and writings, its kind-of the go-to when people are writing an ...

Hey, thanks for choosing me as a critic :) Hey so both the content and the rhyme was a bit dissatisfying. I personally believe you can change rhyme scheme if ...

Hey, very simple and I love it, also pretty original in taste and idea. I strongly suggest that you use stanza's. By brief analysis it looks like it has a ...

Okay ImHero critic here and I've come to bring some bad news. I'm not a fan. I don't like the idea, the cliche idea without a ton of really satisfying ...

I think this sounds very awkward but its not your fault. I don't know much about these but writing it in the third person makes it confusing to read. Is ...

Its very simple, and that's great for your audience. It does however lack originality. I do know that it is well intended but still, takes a lot of the meaning ...

"come all the way from the bottom of the spine. " my* This is unfinished.. It should defiantly be longer, it seems like a prologue.. "walked away in my own ...

You said me to much and understand in the first two stanza's, it didn't flow to well to me.. Shattered hearts, is a cliche.. so is the Jigsaw puzzle.. I ...

I would give this a 8/10 :) cos its eloquence and its position on its writing is original. 1st stanza: Amazing, best opener and maybe even a better closer 2nd ...

I liked this piece a lot; your best I read so far ! I will rate this a 8/10.. I rated it 8/10 because the start sounded a tab bit ...

I like this piece, at times the rhythm was disrupted, and the flow was off but its really good! I give it a 5/10 because it was at times hard ...

I liked it and i'm usually one that one likes rhyme poems ! It was very in depth and makes the reader think every stanza, let alone every word.. Sometimes ...

Hey, I liked it! 6\10, simply because its one chapter and I wanna see some of the back ground in the next chapters, you know? It reminds me of Gears ...