ImHero

I don't quite know about this one... (i'll explain) What I liked? -this fabulously hinted with imagery and put readers into this mellow tone. That was done very well. -Explained ...

Firstly, you need to abide by the standards set forth by YWS and check the box for language. We wouldn't wan't little kids learning new words now? :) Okay seriously, ...

Hmm... this piece of poetry seems to be random. What I mean by that is you talk about one thing- don't explain it talk about another thing- then try to ...

Hmm.. I think I will pick this one for my next review? :) What I liked? -The form or the composure of the words. - It filled an aesthetically pleasing ...

Hmmm.. Simple and has a very good context to it. :) My likes: -The medafore to life and the ashes, that we burn brightest when we stop searching for the ...

It is ImHero here to review your writing! What I liked? -original approach -the silliness - the idea- because it makes the reader think What can be improved? -Well you ...

hmm.. to me it seems like you are comparing running to writing. I'm sure that MIGHT sound like an odd assumption but maybe you could understand if you read it ...

Hello, I was wondering if you would like a quick review? Too bad, you submitted it here so I will review anyways. :) Things I liked: -AaBbCcDd rhyme scheme. :) ...

Oh my gosh. I hate when gems like this go unnoticed. Only four comments, which with this system is standard, and zero likes?! Outrageous! Well here, I will give you ...

I love when I run into something of yours! You are one of my most favorite poets of all time and I truly mean this! I know that you write ...

Hello, it is ImHero here! Firstly, many of these rhymes made the reading of the poem shaky and seemed as-if you were trying too hard and it hurt the integrity ...

Hello sir! Or Mam! :) I like this poetry as its content is the main theme and the structure comes after. It is usually the other way around. I do ...

This review is for Bolt obviously. :P This is simple, sweet, unique and creative. I am glad you wrote it because it is simply silly. I think it could be ...

Hello and welcome to YoungWritersSociety if I am unmistaken! This poem hints with fun ques of creativity but could use some more captivating vocabulary, voice and line break-structure- too start. ...

I thought this was a random poem because I didn't know what lemmings where. Don't worry I looked it up! I get the content and the rhythm but there is ...