Ilium417

Hi Forever! Long time no see, thanks for the review :) A little clarification: Factories will be explained in Chspter 2. And, while not said at first, this story is ...

Eyyy I really wanted to read this poem and review it but I can't because sadly, the text was removed, so I guess my comment will be that I'm LDS ...

Thanks so much for the review! It really helped a lot! :D I was more focused on emotion when I wrote this than word choice so I'll make sure to ...

Thanks for the review Addison! And congrats with the review star! it's shiny XD

Man, I see you reviewing everywhere XD Thanks so much for reviewing my poem! The situation that prompted this poem is that I've loved the same girl for basically all ...

Thanks so much for the review! Have an awesome day! :D

Awesome! Thanks! :D

I know I'm not either of these awesome people, but maybe you can write a poem from the perspective of a window. Or someone looking through I guess but I ...

Thanks for the review!! :D

Bro, thanks so much for the review! That really helps! (I wrote it with like no preparation, so that was basically my emotion doing the writing XDD)

Thanks for the review! :D

That's pretty awesome that you're willing to share my book, but I'm still not comfortable with it going anywhere online besides here, so will you please take it down? In ...

Thanks so much for the review! I actually was thinking about someone in particular when I was writing it xD

Bro, thank's so much for the review, it helps a lot!

Thanks so much for the review! :D