Hi Ilium417,
Mailice here with a short review!
I think you can interpret as much out of it as there are different opinions. I don't know what the exact meaning is, and I don't want to know the correct answer, because that would definitely ruin the effect a bit, knowing that. As I'm writing this I'm still a bit hung up on my own interpretations, so I'll explain them a bit later, but now on to some points I noticed while reading:
You have taken a very "aggressive" (not in a negative sense) tone, seemingly almost to wake the reader up. You are direct and at times go as far as describing how someone is to blame when they can't fight back. I like how you always try to keep everything in questions, almost as if you are shouting at someone who has been wrongly arrested but you now have to prove their guilt.
At times there is some controversy in between, as it almost seems contradictory how the narrator comes in between all the questions and sometimes aggressive commands, and briefly talks about something positive. It's a bit of that military expression of keeping the soldier down and wearing his head down. In any case, it left a lasting impression.
Well I think on the one hand you are addressing the reader and the whole to free yourself from the shackles of society and not to follow blindly after having done that for so long since you were little and learnt that in school. Now the characters are grown up and can shed their handcuffs, but they can't. They have become too drilled that they take their own freedom in hand and start using the same methods as those who have been free for longer, and now blame the next in handcuffs. I think I see a blaming of education and school, but also climate change, that you can't change anything when you are trapped or confined in the skin of a child, and yet that gives you the opportunity for freedom and you should use it before it's too late, and partly helps to make things worse. Sometimes I also thought you were talking about how one should submit to society, that one should gender the feelings and emotions one has and also keep them under masks. A kind of invisible chain that is built up with that so as not to kill this invisible monster that is hiding behind it.
Have fun writing,
Mailice
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