IlhamAlKhatib

Heello hamza... here is Ilham reviewing your work :Pp so get ready !! ummmm,,, first of all I liked your work, the way you describe mirrors and the words used ...

Hello. I'm here to review your piece today. Hope I do understand it as well :)) The beginning is good, it lets one feels like you are talking about a ...

There is something I don't understand. She was so sad s\and mad for she was going to swim with the teens who were older than her and they would be ...

Hello, Shoaib. How are you ?!! You always write something that can grab my attention. Wow It was so good. It touched something beyond my skin. I like the way ...

Hello, Maryletsflyaway. I want to review your work now, so hope I do it well :)) Well, there are some things that remained unclear, regarding what they did, why she ...

Well... I like it... it's good I think you said something in my mind... Like you're bothered by the way things are favored for lots of people rather than other ...

Hello, there !! It's been interesting, nice work, man !! I enjoyed it, but What it did not really sound like a poem for me, though it's good interesting, but ...

Well, well, well,,, I think it so good,,, at some parts, it was so touching inside of me... I like the way you described things around and in the background... ...

The end of the world is near, in a year it will be here. I certainly hope it is not true, for there are many things I mean to do. ...

My dream is to rule the world for one day, a week… or a period of time… Not because I want to be famous or want to be rich… and ...

My dream is to rule the world for one day, a week… or a period of time… Not because I want to be famous or want to be rich… and ...

Ummm I like it... I feel, kinda, it reflects something like you have put your trust in someone and this one cheated you or was not as much as you ...

"I am a butterfly, I am a worm disguised with angelic wings But don't you know this about butterflies?" "You have only seen me from afar And though I hate ...

"I could remember the times when the nights had been as hot as the day, when it was a different man every week, with heavy grunts and moans and gasps ...

"I could remember the times when the nights had been as hot as the day, when it was a different man every week, with heavy grunts and moans and gasps ...