Ignatius5453

Hey, just to point something out, just because it's poetry doesn't mean the first letter in every line has to be capitalized, it actually shouldn't be. So fix that up, ...

Fix the grammar stuff and this will be great. I connect with this poem 100%, with Harry Potter done, it's like my childhood is officially over, it feels sad and ...

Its really hard to judge them without the melody you had in mind. The words seem good and I can kind of get a picture of what you felt when ...

It was absolutely brilliant! I agree with every line, it was so perfect. I can't even describe how good it was. To build off of the comment above me, I ...

I want to be a bird. Nothing would make me happier , Thant to fly away . than To open my wings and soar through the heavens, g liding on ...

I can't really tell, but I might have wiped a tear from my eye. This poem made sense, it was well worded, if a little 15th century Englandy (if that ...

It was deep, I'll say that much, you put meaning and emotion into it and tried to speak with a depth of knowledge and stuff that matters, but I didn't ...

I can relate to this poem perfectly, I deal with everything you seem to have mentioned, and other than this poem being legen.... wait for it.... dary, this poem had ...

You vocabulary was outstanding and overall your poem flowed very well. But I agree with someone below me, the title didn't really preface the poem well, the insecurity was shown ...

Ok, this is a very common theme in poetry it seems, the 'poor me' approach, everybody seems to do it once in a while, just because, well to be blunt: ...

The fact that its easy to read and not long make it brilliant to begin with, but the fact that its short makes it hard to put meaningful content into ...

Well, I only read the first one, and I liked it very much. You had great flow and wording, and everything matched up. Also you had proper grammar, punctuation, and ...

Well Sassykat fixed your punctuation, but you also need to fix capitalization, not every first letter in each line needs to be a capital letter, follow the punctuation. If the ...

I absolutely adored it. The thing from start to finish was good. But to offer one critique I would offer that you change the fact you have no punctuation, I ...

Good punctuation and capitalization, and the whole poem was bloody brilliant. My favorite part was: I soar up, legs outstretched, wind whipping thorugh my body. I plummet down, legs tucked, ...