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I just hope you get over it, How could you hate yourself when you don't watch your self? When you talk, when you sleep, when you laugh.. You don't watch ...

Hello, Firstly, I think that I like your vocabulary in the poem and also that you have added alot of emotion to it. I like the first line which is:- ...

I am confused. Why is there so much going on here? It seems like you have just scribbled and dear, this type of writing is not something to publish online. ...

THIS IS AMAZINGG. I seriously hate reading short stories but- This, I couldnt stop and the urge to continue swept over me. Your description is just perfect and oh, I ...

The format of this poem is SO DIFFERENT. Maybe thats why it seems so unique and catchy. Man' everyone is so much better than me. I love your rhymes and ...

This is seriously one of the best poems I have ever read. You sound like a proffesional POET. Too bad there is nothing I actually dislike about this poem. Every ...

Its sad that Marlie is gone, but I am sure she watches you and smiles; for the person you have become. This poem contained a great amount of emotion and ...

What I love about this poem is that everything is TRUE. The way you have analysed your poem and the way you have made it sound so soothing. I loved ...

Keeping in mind that you are 14 years young. This poem is of very high calliber. The rhymes are pretty soothing as well. Your poem gives me a clear view ...

I love your idea and how the story flows. We all should keep in mind that we are not some proffesional writers and that making mistakes will make us LEARN. ...

This poem is very sentimental, It could have been better if you focused on something good since poetry looks better that way and alot of feeling is given to it. ...

This poem is very sentimental, It could have been better if you focused on something good since poetry looks better that way and alot of feeling is given to it. ...

Its quite hard to believe that this is written by a thirteen year old. This peice of poetry seems so mature I would be looking forward for more work of ...

I think that this story is incomplete and that you are moving very fast. It would be good to add some description to it and all describe the feelings of ...

Lovely song. I will try singing it with a guitar since its like really relatable. This actually shows how a person spents their teenage life. Its a song which can ...