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Hey again! I'm baaaaaaaaaccckkk . This chapter was a marked improvement from Chapter 1! While there are still a couple choppy sentences and run-ons, or a missing comma here and ...

This poem is wonderful! I can't begin to imagine how you wrote something so ethereal and dare I say it, [I]magical[/I}. However the rhymes are a little weak, but that's ...

Hey there! I really like this poem. The enjambment really adds to the reading experience. I left every line curious as to what was coming next, and it never disappointed! ...

Hey there, this was an awesome story! Raygal, Riptide, and Grimbell are all distinct and super interesting. On that note, I felt that the language got a little elementary school-ish ...

As someone who loves the night, this was great! It really got the feeling of being alone during a peaceful night. But it almost felt like you were running out ...

Hey there! This story is super great, I'm excited to see where this goes :) . That said, I have a couple notes. I'll try to keep it short, though ...

This was a pretty good short story! But I have a few notes; - There was a lot of "I felt this way" and "I felt that way" instead of ...

This was a good poem. The topic matter was handled well, and the mood is apparent. However, I feel as though the imagery could have been more striking. You did ...

First things first; this is an amazing story. I really enjoyed how you know who your audience is, and didn't try to dumb down the metaphors, vocabulary, etc. HGsomeone mentioned ...

I love this poem! One of my favorite things about it is how you kept the lines short and simple. It really reads as a stream of frantic thoughts tangled ...

Nice poem! While I'm impressed, I feel as though the imagery could have been more specific. To me, a poet is someone who knows how to paint a picture with ...