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Hey there! This poem was certainly relatable, but I have an issue with it. I feel like if the summary hadn't told me what the poem was about, I wouldn't ...

Aw heck yeah! Tabby's going for it now! This chapter was really great, and I love the use of dialogue in your stories. You seem to really have a knack ...

Heyo! Alpacas coming's at you with a review! And speaking of pop culture references... I'm baaaaaaaccck I quite literally just reviewed Chapter Five, but hey, I'm on a roll, baby! ...

Howdy hey, Alpacas comin' at you with a review (that sorta rhymed...) This was a great chapter, but I have a couple things here that you could work on: -There ...

Howdy, it's your friendly neighborhood spiderman Gryffindor, here to give you a review. This was super well written, but I felt like Ember's characterization got a little lost. Sometimes she ...

Ooooh, that drama at the end! I really loved this story! The character narrating was very interesting and fun, and you get a good feel for their personality, which I ...

Hey there! I'm a fellow Gryffindor here to give you a review! I really liked this chapter. The narration, characters, and plot were all delight to read, and I found ...

This was a great story! The characters are distinct, and you really get a feel for how they all interact, even in this short scene. The only issue I have ...

Howdy! I'm just your local Gryffindor here to give you a review. First, I just want to point out a few grammar errors: -"its golden raze" Rays, not raze -"Blinking ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed this story. The imagery was good, and you really captured the mood of the scene. This prologue is really good, and I'm excited to see ...

This was great! You were really able to get your rhyme scheme down. The theme is great, and I love the 'Feeling blue' feel to it (which only makes sense). ...

This poem is spectacular! The imagery, the language, the metaphors, it's all wonderful. You somehow even captured the weird, psychedelic feeling of a dream, while keeping things coherent. While it ...

This chapter was great! Nice to know that our girl Yvie is thicc TM. All of the characters have very distinct personalities, and I find myself getting more and more ...

I love this story. Plain and simple. One of my favorite things about it is how you had something that could've become gimmicky and annoying very quickly, but you kept ...

My goodness! What a wonderful poem. I absolutely adore the use of imagery, and how the relationship is left mostly up for interpretation. If this is an old poem, then ...