Iamnotperfect

Hi, firstly I liked the poem and secondly I will only comment on the content rather than grammar, as that is something I am sure you will be able to ...

Hi I liked the poem. It was simple and to the point, fortunately it wasn't one of the many cliche type of poems that I always read about love, though ...

Hi, regarding the poem I don't really feel emotionally connected to it. I feel like it is dry and you should put more sentiment in it . It just seems ...

Hi I think the idea behind the poem is good however I am sure you can expand these sentences so much more. The way you split the stanzas is good ...

Well I don't really have much to add to the above review. All I want to say is that the poem flows nicely for me however there is a part ...

Hi, I think you started off with the poem very effectively but then the flow had an upside down, for me at least. I understand what you mean with this ...

Hi, I quite like the poem however I prefer the first stanza to the second one. The first stanza strikes me more and the message of the poem is clearer. ...

Hi for some reason I just had to comment on this poem ;) Normally people tend to use repetition but it doesn't really work however I think that you used ...

Hi, to be honest I find the poem quite cliche, it's nice but I have heard all the things you said so many times and I don't think that's your ...

Hi I actually enjoyed reading this poem. I like this part: No one knows its story, or why such a smile can appear to cry. But they bend and beg ...

Hi there there are things that I like about this poem and others where I think you need some improvement. Starting from the first stanza: Icey, silver glitters of frost, ...

Hi there, I really like this poem. I do agree with all your points and the poem has a a meaning to it, also I can feel the frustration of ...

Hi I enjoyed reading this poem. You are really good at describing images and capturing the moment with the use of good vocabulary. I love the way you started the ...

Hi if I have to be honest I don't like so much repetition either. I don't really like this stanza: Ugly Mirror, Pretty mirror, My dear love and fear; Pity ...

Hi I like this poem. I think that the simplicity of your writing made it worth reading. In addition to this the emotion is there and I can relate to ...