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Re: I like my house with all the doors open
Wow! Such an epic poem! I like how you've picked quite a common issue/phobia to work with here! I really like that! Okay, lets get down to the nitty-gritty stuff. ...
Aug 8, 2014 -
Re: The Psychic Circle: Chapter 12
I am here! Rearing to go! Nitpicks for a Special Friend! Okay, so I was saying a few words over in my head and wondering what you had missed out: ...
Aug 8, 2014 -
Re: Battle Arena- Challenge 1 - Dagger Dog
Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Nitpicks! And he saw my Aunt show me where that are yesterday. 'That' should be 'they' as it needs to be plural because you used ...
Aug 7, 2014 -
Re: Trying: Chapter 4.1
Why did you not inform me that this was out? I am always watching . Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Nitpicking Time! However, niceness was something all murderers were labelled ...
Aug 4, 2014 -
Re: For Everly: Chapter 5: Wendy
Hey! IamTraunt here to review! I'm in India so sorry if my reviews are late. There is WiFi here so I will be online. Nitpicks! The treehouse gives way to ...
Aug 3, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Chapter One *Revised*
Hey! IamTraunt here to review for my wonderful Marvel buddy, VB. Nitpicking time! There was quite a few sentences that were quote hard to read. A few were just a ...
Aug 3, 2014 -
Re: Better Things: Chapter 28: Finally, Something Happy.
Hey! IamTraunt here to review this for you all the way from India! Hee hee. You're the first person to get a review since I'm out here. Okay, so Noelle ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: Peter's Poem
Hey! IamTraunt here to... Um, comment I guess xD I can't really review this. Like the others have said, this is short, sweet and very effective. So, a four line ...
Jul 30, 2014 -
Re: Better Things: Chapter 27: Asteria: Coming Clean (Edited!)
Yesterday, I look at this and think 'It's really late (as I live in England as you know) so I'll do it tomorrow'. I come online today. 5 comments. Will ...
Jul 30, 2014 -
Re: Hold You Close
Hey! IamTraunt here to review this short story for you! Nitpicking Time! About 7 minutes later she came and got us, and we all ventured into the dark hospital .When ...
Jul 29, 2014 -
Re: Burning
Hey! IamTraunt here to review this short story for you! Can I just say... I love your avatar! Yay Doctor Who! Nitpicking Time! The boat was small and called “The ...
Jul 29, 2014 -
Re: Trembling Power: Chapter Two
Hey! IamTraunt here to review this piece that I've been promising to do for quite a while now. So here I am, happy Writer? :D So, last time I didn't ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: Trembling Power: Chapter One
I am so unbelievably lazy, Writer, I should stop procrastinating, don't you agree? Hey! IamTraunt here to review for my lovely friend(s), Writer and Raven. Okay... Writer... Raven... Did I ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: Write! Something!
Hey! IamTraunt here to review this work... that was written in 2012 ! Okay... This will seem really weird reviewing this, but don't worry - I reviewed something that was ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: .
Hey! IamTraunt here to review ;) Nitpicking Time! She had lost control and crashed , sending her to the ground . She groans from the pain of her landing slowly ...
Jul 28, 2014