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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Psychic Circle: Chapter 16

    Hiya! Yes I am here finally ! I'm sorry for being so terribly late. I feel absolutely awful for not reviewing any soon, but you know how life is. Rushed, ...

    Sep 22, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Trying: Chapter 5.2

    Sorry in advance. My phone is playing up -_- Hey, Writer! Yes... I'm here and I'm punctual. (For once). Okay! Let's get down to business! I didn’t know why but ...

    Sep 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Phoenix Inferno- Chapter 1.2

    Hey, Christina! I promised your sister I would review this so... here I am! Hee hee. Okay, so as your sister will tell you, I loooooove helping with the structural ...

    Sep 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: It's Better

    Hey Writer! A review here for you :3 It’s better to feel weakness than to feel nothing at all This is very true. If we feel weak, we try to ...

    Sep 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: One More Stupid Love Song

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    Hey, Vereen! So I reviewed 1more's so I will for you. "But I really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really ...

    Sep 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Drowning Beauty

    Hey, paula08! Beastly, roaring, deadly sea, Astounding blue with a foamy relief Its growl overcomes any place for plea Flaking rocks with waves of grief. The first line reminded me ...

    Sep 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Dawn of the Daughter of God - Chapter 9

    Hey, Therese! Your cousin here to review! So... I'm going to take the reigns so-to-speak and go right into it. A beautiful chapter, I must say. I really enjoyed reading ...

    Sep 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Deleted #5

    Hey, Cuz! I'm here to review. Okay, so I'm going to jump right in there... So, I'm in the car writing this. I just asked my mom what "fronds" are ...

    Sep 8, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Reworded

    Hey, CreativelyWritten! So, I was wondering if you had taken a stab at this very old saying: The original phrase: 'Tis a lesson you should heed, try, try again. If ...

    Sep 6, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 7 Ways to Reach the Moon (Pt. 7)

    Hey, fortis! Wow, the formatting of this poem is certainly unique. Well. The whole poem is unique! I'll have to read the rest to understand this but I'll comment on ...

    Sep 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: For VeerenVKS

    Hey, 1more! All I can say really is how humorous this is. It's really witty, from line 1 to line 5. It's short, simple, to the point. I can say ...

    Sep 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Endless Night

    Hey, silver! Welcome to YWS :3 I hope you enjoy your time here! Okay... So I'll jump right in to this... Themes Oh. Wow. I love this theme! Life is ...

    Sep 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: murder in the write

    Hey, VB. Goodness. This is our type of thing, right? XD We just love this demented, horrory, gory, strange, mesmerizing, wonderful, in our eyes beautiful style. The blood really wet ...

    Sep 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Facciamo Sesso

    Howdy, Booshian! I'm on a reviewing roll! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your time with us! Okay, so here: Wandering,yearning fingertips explore. You need a space between "wander" ...

    Sep 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Always and Forever

    Hey, reids26 ! Welcome to YWS! Wow, this is quite a short, but powerful poem. I believe that you did have a rhyme going at first, as in line one ...

    Sep 3, 2014


As the notifications drift in I stop and wonder. Why do they take so long? Do they have adventures we don't know about? I bet they do. When they come I will ask myself. What amazing adventure has this straggling notification been on? How far did it travel, and why didn't it take me?
— TypoWithoutCoffee