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Re: The Psychic Circle: Chapter 16
Hiya! Yes I am here finally ! I'm sorry for being so terribly late. I feel absolutely awful for not reviewing any soon, but you know how life is. Rushed, ...
Sep 22, 2014 -
Re: Trying: Chapter 5.2
Sorry in advance. My phone is playing up -_- Hey, Writer! Yes... I'm here and I'm punctual. (For once). Okay! Let's get down to business! I didn’t know why but ...
Sep 14, 2014 -
Re: Phoenix Inferno- Chapter 1.2
Hey, Christina! I promised your sister I would review this so... here I am! Hee hee. Okay, so as your sister will tell you, I loooooove helping with the structural ...
Sep 14, 2014 -
Re: It's Better
Hey Writer! A review here for you :3 It’s better to feel weakness than to feel nothing at all This is very true. If we feel weak, we try to ...
Sep 11, 2014 -
Re: One More Stupid Love Song
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Sep 10, 2014
Hey, Vereen! So I reviewed 1more's so I will for you. "But I really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really ... -
Re: Drowning Beauty
Hey, paula08! Beastly, roaring, deadly sea, Astounding blue with a foamy relief Its growl overcomes any place for plea Flaking rocks with waves of grief. The first line reminded me ...
Sep 10, 2014 -
Re: Dawn of the Daughter of God - Chapter 9
Hey, Therese! Your cousin here to review! So... I'm going to take the reigns so-to-speak and go right into it. A beautiful chapter, I must say. I really enjoyed reading ...
Sep 9, 2014 -
Re: Deleted #5
Hey, Cuz! I'm here to review. Okay, so I'm going to jump right in there... So, I'm in the car writing this. I just asked my mom what "fronds" are ...
Sep 8, 2014 -
Re: Reworded
Hey, CreativelyWritten! So, I was wondering if you had taken a stab at this very old saying: The original phrase: 'Tis a lesson you should heed, try, try again. If ...
Sep 6, 2014 -
Re: 7 Ways to Reach the Moon (Pt. 7)
Hey, fortis! Wow, the formatting of this poem is certainly unique. Well. The whole poem is unique! I'll have to read the rest to understand this but I'll comment on ...
Sep 5, 2014 -
Re: For VeerenVKS
Hey, 1more! All I can say really is how humorous this is. It's really witty, from line 1 to line 5. It's short, simple, to the point. I can say ...
Sep 5, 2014 -
Re: Endless Night
Hey, silver! Welcome to YWS :3 I hope you enjoy your time here! Okay... So I'll jump right in to this... Themes Oh. Wow. I love this theme! Life is ...
Sep 5, 2014 -
Re: murder in the write
Hey, VB. Goodness. This is our type of thing, right? XD We just love this demented, horrory, gory, strange, mesmerizing, wonderful, in our eyes beautiful style. The blood really wet ...
Sep 4, 2014 -
Re: Facciamo Sesso
Howdy, Booshian! I'm on a reviewing roll! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your time with us! Okay, so here: Wandering,yearning fingertips explore. You need a space between "wander" ...
Sep 3, 2014 -
Re: Always and Forever
Hey, reids26 ! Welcome to YWS! Wow, this is quite a short, but powerful poem. I believe that you did have a rhyme going at first, as in line one ...
Sep 3, 2014
