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Re: the Goldberg School-prologue
Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Ooo! I love sci-fi! Nitpicks! As if they knew that success meant that, the world could possibly change. You don't need a comma here. They ...
Jul 11, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter 21: Juno's Lock-In 1.3 (The Last)
I am gonna be first! Hey, IamTraunt here to review :) Nitpicks! There was a boy there that nobody seemed to know, a nineteen year old who started to talk ...
Jul 11, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter 20: Asteria's Lock-In 1.2
... Oh no. Oh no no no. JUNO O.O Poor Juno! Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Nitpick! “She was raped,” I say, “With an overdosage of methanol. She was seven. ...
Jul 9, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 1: We Thought You Were Dead
Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Nitpicks! . I was ready to bash them both into the next tuesday with it. You don't need the 'the' when putting Tuesday Hate to ...
Jul 9, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter 19: Frey's Lock-In 1.2
Hey! IamTraunt here to review! I'm early for once! xD Nitpicks! I shove through people who crowd around her, I push people out of the way. You need a semi ...
Jul 5, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Chapter Four
Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Sorry I'm late (again). Nitpicks! It was like my heart was wired to ache to flick my finger off of her little upturned nose, to ...
Jul 3, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Chapter Three
Hallo! Juhu! IamTraunt here to review this fantastic piece! Nitpicks! Not national, or even regional. This here does not need a comma, as you would not pause after national . ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter 17: Asteria's Lock-In 1.1
Hey! IamTraunt! Yes, my reviews are a little late... Ahem. And scheduled weirdly. But at least I'm here! xD Funny chapter. Very. Well... at the end :) The idiots are ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter 18: Juno's Lock-In 1.2
Hey! IamTraunt here! I'm soooooooooooooooooooo incredibly sorry for not reviewing the last chapter of Things Fall Apart BECAUSE... Yes. Sadly, my phone has broke and I am unable to use ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Hidden Chapter Of Things Fall Apart: Chapter 11: Ben's First Day?
Oh no. Oh no no no! Please tell me you did not foreshadow here: All I’ve done is ask Asteria if Juno is coming to the Lock-In on Friday, and ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter 16: Frey's Lock-In 1.1
Hey! IamTraunt here with a late review! (Sorry!) Nitpicks! Mom has volunteered to chaperone the Lock-In, which doesn’t seem to have an affect on Asteria, and makes Juno feel way ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: Chapter one- A tearful goodbye
Seeing as your new, I'll give you that little extra help and sort out all of the gramma and mistakes for you :) * // = where I have suggested ...
Jun 21, 2014 -
Re: Meet the Cast of Things Fall Apart (Edited!)
Hey! IamTraunt here to... Um, talk? I dunno. Maybe just to admire really. This is truly a great idea - I always love to get to know a person's character ...
Jun 21, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter 15: Juno's Lock-In 1.1
Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Dang it! I'm not first. Again . Oh, well! I've still got plenty to say about this fantastic piece of work! I've been looking forward ...
Jun 21, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Chapter Two
Hey, Vanishing Blue (This is your new nickname from me)! IamTraunt here to review! Nitpicks! That only happened in far-fetched stories, in the Bible, in movies ... my life. You ...
Jun 20, 2014
