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Not a bad poem at all!It was new and very thought-provoking which is exactly how a poem should be. Saying this, I think I'll go line by line to point ...

Hi Chaser! "This living room is a black hole of time." The idea here is so absurd in it's simplicity, it made me laugh. Ingenious, really! As a side note, ...

Hi Mage! Since I'm not good with introductions (which is probably why half my work isn't read) and since you are not in front of me to reply to my ...

Hey Aleta! This was a beautiful poem with a much more beautiful meaning. Are you really only 13? Your skills call for a detailed review, here goes: On the lake's ...

Hi JustALittleBarry! This poem was a wonderful idea. And you've done a beautiful job putting the idea across to the readers. Here are a few tips and thoughts: Drowning in ...

Hi herbgirl, You have talent here. This poem is really good. I'll go line by line and tell you my views. broken shards of glass or maybe the long dead ...

Hi Castor! we sat together on the pier, surveying the ocean ahead. i told you it was called 'clearwater', but it didn't live up to its name. waves crashed back ...

This poem is something, I at least, can relate to. Its deep in meaning and tells a lot about you as a person. Thank you for sharing. This being your ...

Hi PrincessInk, I thought this idea was just amazing. The imagery is fabulous. Seeing this is a short poem, I'll go line by line: "I sprinkle my tears on a ...

Hi WrittenEdge! Beautiful piece here. And I/m probably going to say that a lot through this review! ;) The following are suggestions and appreciations of the above story and anything ...

The poem was really good and your questions at the end show that you do have some insight about poetry. So I had to comment. Do understand that the poem ...