Young Writers Society

Hey, I see you're a new member, so welcome! I haven't been on this site in awhile so it's kinda new to me all over again (lol). Before I get ...

Hiya! The review fairy has come ;P Your descriptions and word choice were wonderful, they seemed to transport me into the scene. However, your description of the ocean distracted me. ...

Hello, here's a review for ya. The way you capture both characters personalities and emotions in this instance is wonderful. Your word choice and tone are nice as well. The ...

Hi, i've come to review your poem! First I want to say that I can feel the emotion in this poem and that is a rare quality to find in ...

Okay, you should know by now I like your story, so i'll skip that and go into what could make this better. : ) #1. In the last paragraph the ...

Omygosh! Omygosh! She HAS TO PICK THE FLOWER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay, I'm going to calm down now... I really like the story! But since this is a review I have to correct ...

Hello KLovelace! Merry Christmas! Ho-Ho-Ho! ; ) Anyways, i've never reviewed a story before (that I can remember) i've only done poetry, so please forgive me if it's not helpful ...

That was beautiful. :') I liked the format except that maybe instead of one giant stanza maybe make it a few little ones instead. Also the phrase "When more pressing ...

Tehe it rhymed! :) Making poems that rhyme is not my strong suit so I got a little giggly. :) Anyways this poem really paints a picture of a small ...

I like the repeated phrase "this is a poem". On the other hand I think the format of the poem would look better if you capitalized all the words at ...

I love the message this poem sends and I totally agree with it. However, I did find two tiny little problems that you could fix to make the poem much ...

First want to say that I liked your poem, and now on to errors I noticed... #1 Their are too many periods, try commas and shake it up a bit. ...

I liked it but I got to say it wasn't in my genre of poetry, although it really was good. I think you where trying to say true not "ture" ...

I liked your poem and it painted a picture in my mind (which I liked). But I think the format of the poem could be better if the beginning of ...

This is an amazing poem.I love how the whole thing was a question.I REALLY liked it :) The format was cool, but I think it would be better if the ...