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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I Kept A Secret From You

    I liked this...a little. I thought it a bit bland and unoriginal (because, really, reading it I could hear the same words I had heard million times bouncing around in ...

    Aug 30, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: kissing lessons

    Hey, this was pretty awesome. Not saying it was perfect (and really--who am I to judge? Have you read my work? ;)) but, I enjoyed the rich wealth of imagery ...

    Aug 13, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I Stare.

    Hi, I kind of liked the idea of this poem--unrequited love--a lovely but boring idea. It's been used many times, like Firestarter said before me. Really, this poem didn't catch ...

    Jul 23, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Feeling of Death

    Hi, I loved the weary feeling that oozes from this poem--it's magical--and reminds me sadly of someone I've lost... So good work on that, heh. I didn't like how the ...

    Jul 21, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Gate

    Good day, Chap, Here to give you an unneeded review, as always. Maybe you'll laugh some more by the end. ;) At the beginning of the concrete, we meet

    Jun 29, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Cardiac Conduction

    Hello, I have to agree with Freak on the fact that I didn't get the connection at all to electric stimulation of the heart at all until I read the ...

    Jun 29, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Breach

    Okay, so.... I found it all to be a bit drab as whole. I'm not really into romantic poetry so that might be it. Who knows. The lines just come ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Nostalgic Man

    Okay, first of all, "no ordinary" anything is grammatically incorrect. Whoever taught you that that wording was correct should be slapped upside the head a few dozen times. It makes ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Die Schone Grauen

    Hi Paladin, I'd like to say that I absolutely loved the whole thing but, sadly, I can't. There's a few bugs here and there, which makes me have to dislike ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Because I'm Drawn (RE-EDITED)

    'Sup, buddy, lookin' for a review? Probably not, but you've reviewed a couple of mine so I'll return the favour. ;) You slip right through crinkled fingers...of paper. Yeah, probably ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: The Moon's Halo

    Salutations! I must say, I am near speechless at the pure quality of this work! It's astounding the imagery you weaved into every line of this... It's...spectacular! I barely have ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Tapestry Snake

    Hi, All in all, I believe that this is a brilliant piece. The story you weave into it is amazing, you are clearly a wonderful writer. I just had a ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Night Sky

    Hey there! I thought this piece was very thoughtful and peaceful (except for the odd harshness every now and then). I've always liked the idea of the stars and moon ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Tootie Fruity (Contest)

    Hey, I entered that contest as well! I liked this one, not for it's sheer wordiness or anything, but because it was enjoyable and funny. I'd have to agree with ...

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Contest Entry - One Pink Umbrella

    First of all, I have to this I found this absolutely hilarious. The randomness of it just made it for me. The characterization of the man was amazing! He reminds ...

    Jun 22, 2010


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— O. Henry (William Sydney Porter)