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Re: I Kept A Secret From You
I liked this...a little. I thought it a bit bland and unoriginal (because, really, reading it I could hear the same words I had heard million times bouncing around in ...
Aug 30, 2010 -
Re: kissing lessons
Hey, this was pretty awesome. Not saying it was perfect (and really--who am I to judge? Have you read my work? ;)) but, I enjoyed the rich wealth of imagery ...
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: I Stare.
Hi, I kind of liked the idea of this poem--unrequited love--a lovely but boring idea. It's been used many times, like Firestarter said before me. Really, this poem didn't catch ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: The Feeling of Death
Hi, I loved the weary feeling that oozes from this poem--it's magical--and reminds me sadly of someone I've lost... So good work on that, heh. I didn't like how the ...
Jul 21, 2010 -
Re: The Gate
Good day, Chap, Here to give you an unneeded review, as always. Maybe you'll laugh some more by the end. ;) At the beginning of the concrete, we meet
Jun 29, 2010 -
Re: Cardiac Conduction
Hello, I have to agree with Freak on the fact that I didn't get the connection at all to electric stimulation of the heart at all until I read the ...
Jun 29, 2010 -
Re: Breach
Okay, so.... I found it all to be a bit drab as whole. I'm not really into romantic poetry so that might be it. Who knows. The lines just come ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: A Nostalgic Man
Okay, first of all, "no ordinary" anything is grammatically incorrect. Whoever taught you that that wording was correct should be slapped upside the head a few dozen times. It makes ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Die Schone Grauen
Hi Paladin, I'd like to say that I absolutely loved the whole thing but, sadly, I can't. There's a few bugs here and there, which makes me have to dislike ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Because I'm Drawn (RE-EDITED)
'Sup, buddy, lookin' for a review? Probably not, but you've reviewed a couple of mine so I'll return the favour. ;) You slip right through crinkled fingers...of paper. Yeah, probably ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: The Moon's Halo
Salutations! I must say, I am near speechless at the pure quality of this work! It's astounding the imagery you weaved into every line of this... It's...spectacular! I barely have ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: The Tapestry Snake
Hi, All in all, I believe that this is a brilliant piece. The story you weave into it is amazing, you are clearly a wonderful writer. I just had a ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: The Night Sky
Hey there! I thought this piece was very thoughtful and peaceful (except for the odd harshness every now and then). I've always liked the idea of the stars and moon ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Tootie Fruity (Contest)
Hey, I entered that contest as well! I liked this one, not for it's sheer wordiness or anything, but because it was enjoyable and funny. I'd have to agree with ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Contest Entry - One Pink Umbrella
First of all, I have to this I found this absolutely hilarious. The randomness of it just made it for me. The characterization of the man was amazing! He reminds ...
Jun 22, 2010
