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Thank you!! I definitely agree with everything you said, and will take it into account when editing. I was also really hesitant to write first person-present tense, so I%u2019m glad ...

Thank you for the review! I%u2019ll take what you said into account!

Thank you for the review! :D

Thank you for taking the time to review!

Thank you so much for the review! I definitely agree with you about the %u201Cmetric ton%u201D part. I felt there was something off about it but I couldn%u2019t place it

No problem! I loved reading this! :D

Definitely a lot younger, yet old enough to be attending school. (So, around seven or eight?) You never quite described her appearance, so aside from that, I didn't have very ...

No problem! I noticed you told us a lot more about Cyra and his fathers relationship, rather than showing us it (apologies for the cliched advice) rather than outright spelling ...

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it! :D

Thanks for the review! I really appreciate your suggestions, and I'll definitely incorporate it into future poems of similar nature!

Thank you for the review! Though not necessarily what I intended, I appreciate your interpretation! (It might mean I have to go back and clarify a few things within the ...

Their dynamic remind me of Tiana and Charlotte from Princess and the Frog, lol! Alainna gives me some serious oblivious blonde vibes (I say as a blonde myself)

Thank you for the review! Some of the stanzas you%u2019ve pointed out felt super clunky to me, and I couldn%u2019t place why, but your criticism helps loads! :D

Haha, thanks. I wrote this particular story a good couple years ago, so maybe not. But I'm very glad you liked it!

No problem!