Hiya! Thanks for requesting a review, I hope you are having a great day or night!
Since these are seven unique poems, I'm going to try and review them separately. First off would be your poem "Sadness"
Your use of figurative language here was great, and it seems to be a strong suit of yours, running through all your poetry. The line "Sobbing like a lost madman" was particularly potent. I did think line three and four of the first stanza felt a little disconnected from one another, though I'm not certain why.
Your next poem, "Fly Away" felt a little bit like a continuation of your previous poem. Though this is possibly unintentional, I liked how the first poem is about being 'trapped' while the second is titled 'Fly Away' They both also have similar themes of isolation, if for different reasons.
I found myself chuckling a bit at "I am Sending", it was very relatable, even if it later takes a darker turn. It does feel a little out of place among the other poems, but I do enjoy it on its own.
"Love and Die" and "I'm Sorry" are both very good. My favorite line between the two was
When love swung a knife
As I said earlier, you have a particular talent regarding figurative language. I can 'see' the things you're feeling, if that makes any sense? It makes for a very lively read.
"Another Queer Ballad" was fantastic, though I wouldn't have known it what exactly it was about without the title. It was also distinct from your prior poems, while also still feeling like a continuation. It's a brilliant conclusion to this small collection of poetry, and though each of them stands on their own, together, they make a beautiful short anthology.
All in all, this was a wonderful read. I haven't read poetry in a while, but now I think I've been missing out! Thank you so much for asking me to take a look at this, I had so much fun reading it Keep on writing and have a fantastic day!
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