Horisun

This is a beautiful poem, I saw nothing that needed to be changed nor fixed. Its pure emotion. I am so sorry for your loss. Just from this poem, I ...

This poem is very well written, I really like it, good job. The only thing that I saw was that you sometimes forgot punctuation, but that's about it. You did ...

First off, great poem! I loved how the sentences flowed. And the word choice was great! Pat yourself on the back for a great poem. However, there were a lot ...

I love this so much, this was really good, and actually made me laugh a little. I loved how you crossed out everything that made it not a perfect Christmas, ...

First off, I'm so sorry you feel this way, I hope you get better soon. Second, this poem is really good. I loved it. Keep writing! I don't have anything ...

Great poem. Not much more to say. I've never been in this situation, but I imagine it'd be close to some people. Though, sometimes you used a coma, and had ...

This is a really beautiful poem, with a great message! I didn't see much of a problem with it, it was really good. Pat yourself on the back for a ...

This was a great story, it was sad, true, but a good story, and it had a good conclusion. I have a couple problems with it, though. First of all, ...

Great job, I loved reading this. You moved the story along quite nicely. Your character doesn't feel one dimensional, and your story is interesting, I only have a few things ...

I love this poem! Words flow together, and you had great word choice, and the message is great, I have only two complaints. First of all, the ending was kind ...

This is a great story! I can't wait to read more. The dialogue is really good, and the characters interactions were great! However, there were a few things you could ...

I think this is a great story that is well written, the ending was satisfactory and I really enjoyed it, there were a few things that could be worked on. ...

Incredible! I love how you turned the tables and showed the antagonists prospective, there's nothing to really complain about. I loved how the villain broke the fourth wall, I enjoy ...

Very well written. This poem is very pretty, however, there were a few things you could improve. There was a lot of punctuation issues and letters that need to be ...

The writing was amazing, the wording was great. And you described her emotions well. Its making me kind of upset, imagining this happening to me... Its scary, really. There were ...