Horisun

Hey Liberty! Like your new avatar! I've never read the story this is based off of, sooo yeah... Alright, so I am already very interested in where this is going, ...

Hello! I hope your having a good night! This was a really great poem, the wording was great, and the flow was really nice. I do think some figurative language ...

Hello, SubSubLibrarian! It's me, Horisun, obviously, here to do a review, obviously. I don't have much to say about this chapter, other than the fact that the characters seem to ...

What's that? On the Horisun? It's a... it's a... Review Incoming! First, I want to just say, you have peaked my interest indeed. The characters already seem to have unique ...

What's that? On the Horisun? It's a... It's a... Review incoming! Alright, so, this has a very interesting premise. It feels like a kids daydream, more than anything else, which ...

What's that? On the Horisun? It's a... It's a... INCOMING REVIEW! Hello there! I hope you're having a great day, and if you're not, I hope this review makes it ...

What's that? On the Horisun? It's a... It's a... REVIEW! Alright, so I just want to say, this already looks good. Like- REALLY good. Can you tag me when chapter ...

Haha... This is ONE side of having a sibling, the 50% to 75% of the time for me, my brother and I are arguing if Peach and Daisy are sisters, ...

So, I have a feeling all my predictions from last chapter are wrong... XD Ah well, you win some, you lose some, and I like the direction the story is ...

Hello! It is I, Horisun, here to review your work! (Obviously) This was a really great chapter, and the letter from Kkachi's Mom was a great insight to her personality! ...

So is the other side of the waterfall some sort of other dimension? That could be very interesting. And the pool is bottomless? Is he exaggerating, or is that really ...

Alrighty, this was a really great chapter! I loved that Kkachi and her Mother had a special place, and it was nice to see how much the Emperor loved her! ...

Ah ha! SHE must write in it! She must forge her own story! It is part of the librarians masterplan! MWA HAHAHAHA! Alright, General Dal is EVIL! (I don't know ...

Hello! It is I, your friendly neighborhood Horisun! I really like this chapter. It enhances Usans cuteness ten fold, which I'm all for! This review is going to be mostly ...

Hello, I'm Horisun, here to review your poem! Let me just say, I really like this. The message is grand, and the word choice is wonderful. I loved how this ...