Horisun

Good afternoon! Or whatever time it is when you read this! It doesn't matter, because I'm here to review your work! First of all, I just wanna say I really ...

This poem was incredible! I love how it feels as if these are the thoughts racing through your mind at that moment, as if you aren't planning what's coming out. ...

Hello, Minty! I'm super excited to cover this next chapter, as the first one really caught my attention. And this next one only continues that trend! I especially love how ...

Hello, Mintyleaf! Have a belated welcome to the Young Writers Society! I really like how you are setting this story up! I have a feeling there is a lot you ...

This poem reminded me a bit of clips from children's beauty pageants. You know the ones, with the parents forcing their children to wear makeup, stuff them in frilly costumes, ...

Hello, Yoshikrab! Have a belated welcome to the Young Writers Society! As a fellow fan of Wings Of Fire, I so agree that Scarlet deserved more page time. She is ...

This is absolutely incredible! I adore the opening stanzas, and this entire thing just hits all the right spots! This is just too good to exist! My one and only ...

Hello, there! And congratulations on getting literary spotlight! I think this poem absolutely deserves it! I love stories about the trials of leading people, and I love seeing how its ...

Great poem! Except for the fact that you missed the most important part of October, my Birthday! Just kidding. We all know that's the best part of the entire year ...

Hello there! Horisun here! I hope you're having an epic Review Month! I loved, loved, loved this poem. It was incredible. It has a very whimsical feeling to it, and ...

Hello, Walker! Welcome to the Young Writers Society! First off, I really loved the message. To me, this meant picking yourself back up when you're down, and improving yourself after ...

That secret message is so relatable it hurts XD I like to say I have a large vocabulary, but much of the words here are new to me, such as ...

Hello, Horselover! I'm really, really sorry I never got to reviewing this, even though I promised to. I'm going to try to make up for the long wait, even though ...

Hello, and happy Review Month! This is a really interesting concept! And this first chapter was executed really well, as I'm already brimming with questions! Who is this girl? Why ...

Hello there, and happy Review Month! I will totally send this poem to my greatest enemy, to both creep them out, and amaze them with this awesome poem! The lyrics ...