Horisun

Hello there, and a belated welcome to the Young Writers Society! I hope you are having a fantastic day! This poem was absolutely gorgeous! It painted a perfect image in ...

Hello, I hope you are having a good day or night! As you can most likely guess, I'm here to do a review! So, right off the bat, a few ...

Hello there! I hope you are having a good night in quarantine! This poems title stood out instantly when I was trying to decide what to review. Its theme reflects ...

Hello there! I hope your having a wonderful day and night! I don't have much time at the moment, but I will try and do this prologue justice! First off, ...

Hello there! Welcome to they Young Writers Society! I hope you love it just as much as I have! I just wanna say, there are some really interesting lines here. ...

Hello there! I hope you are having a wonderful morning, noon, or night! This is incredibly relatable, as I've just went back to reread my old works. Most of them ...

Hello there! Sorry for the late response! I've had a pretty busy week. But I'm here now! So.... Yay! Right off the bat, I really enjoy Locusts character. I think ...

Good morning, noon, or night! I'm really excited to see Aalias perspective! I think you did a really good job on expanding her personality in this chapter! Sandy is interesting. ...

Ooh... This is interesting! I thought you were setting something up with the librarian, so this did catch me off guard. But I'm already imagining all the different things you ...

I just realized that Scarlet killed all her sisters, so even if she does manage to safe Condor, she will meet an even more tragic end. On a less depressing ...

Hello there! It's me! The person spamming your notifications with reviews! Right off the bat, the first line was a missed joke. You wrote "Blistering, scorching, blazing," And you could've ...

Hello! It's me again! I really enjoyed seeing Morrowseer here! If they had me before, it would be a really interesting dynamic when they met again in book one! Just ...

Anddddd I'm back from the last review, so no need for intros! This is an oddly pure moment between Scarlet and her mom. It was a pleasant suprise, even if ...

Hello! I reviewed your last chapter, and even though I'm a bit late to the party, I'm excited to review this one! I noticed that you did a really great ...

Gotta say, I can really relate to a monster being under my bed. I used to sleep on a bunk bed, and the monster just WOULDN'T stop snoring. Oh wait, ...