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Re: I (still) Love You
Hello, I hope you are having a good day or night! Wow, geez, this poem hit me right in the feels when I least expected it, lol! It's so much ...
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Re: LMS VI: Shadows & Dragonfire - Prologue + Chapter 1.1
Hello, I hope you're having a good day or night! I love stories about dragons, so when I saw a description for this work, I knew I had to check ...
Sep 11, 2022 -
Re: Among the Dragons - Chapter 2.2
Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! First off, it should be said I have not Read Before the Dragons, but that has not effected my ...
Sep 10, 2022 -
Re: Seven Cities - Chapter 1
Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! First off, I absolutely loved reading this. The setting was so atmospheric and comforting, and I felt like I ...
Sep 10, 2022 -
Re: Can You Hear God?
Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! I'll admit, I was a little hesitant to read this. But though I am atheist, I still related to ...
Sep 9, 2022 -
Re: The happy, carefree, stupid clown song!
Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! Your poem made me profoundly uncomfortable, which I imagine is what you were going for! I felt as though ...
Sep 8, 2022 -
Re: Storyteller's Syndrome - Book 0 (Invocation to Kelev)
Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! Right off the bat, I loved the tone of this piece. As the prior reviewer stated, there's something so ...
Sep 6, 2022 -
Re: The Fallen King: Chapter Nine
Hello! I hope this review finds you in good health! I saw this work hanging about in the Green Room, and thought I'd check it out! First off, I really ...
Sep 5, 2022 -
Re: At the Sushi Bar
Hello! I hope this finds you in good health :D I'm not a huge fan of Sushi myself, but the way you describe the conveyer belt, and how its piled ...
Sep 5, 2022 -
Re: Hannah’s doll
Hello! I hope you're having a good day or night! I just want to say, I loved this story. It was so sweet and made me feel all warm and ...
Sep 5, 2022 -
Re: Today, I Locked Myself and Cried: A Series of Poetry
Hiya! Thanks for requesting a review, I hope you are having a great day or night! Since these are seven unique poems, I'm going to try and review them separately. ...
Sep 3, 2022 -
Re: It ended at Midnight -Chapter 6
Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! The visuals in this chapter were spectacular. Over the course of this scene, it progressed from a refuge to ...
Sep 3, 2022 -
Re: The Cute Dagashiya Story
Hi! I hope you are having a good day or night! Outlines are very important in regard to writing your story. I think you've done quite the job in summarizing ...
Sep 3, 2022 -
Re: It ended at Midnight -Chapter 5
Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! This story has taken quite a turn, one I would not have expected upon the first chapter. (Though, that ...
Sep 2, 2022 -
Re: It ended at Midnight -Chapter 4
Hello! I hope you are having a fantastic day or night! Straight off the bat, there's a lot to like about this chapter. I like how swiftly your story moves, ...
Aug 20, 2022
