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  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: I (still) Love You

    Hello, I hope you are having a good day or night! Wow, geez, this poem hit me right in the feels when I least expected it, lol! It's so much ...

    Sep 13, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: LMS VI: Shadows & Dragonfire - Prologue + Chapter 1.1

    Hello, I hope you're having a good day or night! I love stories about dragons, so when I saw a description for this work, I knew I had to check ...

    Sep 11, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Among the Dragons - Chapter 2.2

    Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! First off, it should be said I have not Read Before the Dragons, but that has not effected my ...

    Sep 10, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Seven Cities - Chapter 1

    Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! First off, I absolutely loved reading this. The setting was so atmospheric and comforting, and I felt like I ...

    Sep 10, 2022
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: Can You Hear God?

    Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! I'll admit, I was a little hesitant to read this. But though I am atheist, I still related to ...

    Sep 9, 2022
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Horror Re: The happy, carefree, stupid clown song!

    Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! Your poem made me profoundly uncomfortable, which I imagine is what you were going for! I felt as though ...

    Sep 8, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Spiritual Re: Storyteller's Syndrome - Book 0 (Invocation to Kelev)

    Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! Right off the bat, I loved the tone of this piece. As the prior reviewer stated, there's something so ...

    Sep 6, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: The Fallen King: Chapter Nine

    Hello! I hope this review finds you in good health! I saw this work hanging about in the Green Room, and thought I'd check it out! First off, I really ...

    Sep 5, 2022
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: At the Sushi Bar

    Hello! I hope this finds you in good health :D I'm not a huge fan of Sushi myself, but the way you describe the conveyer belt, and how its piled ...

    Sep 5, 2022
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Hannah’s doll

    Hello! I hope you're having a good day or night! I just want to say, I loved this story. It was so sweet and made me feel all warm and ...

    Sep 5, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Today, I Locked Myself and Cried: A Series of Poetry

    Hiya! Thanks for requesting a review, I hope you are having a great day or night! Since these are seven unique poems, I'm going to try and review them separately. ...

    Sep 3, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: It ended at Midnight -Chapter 6

    Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! The visuals in this chapter were spectacular. Over the course of this scene, it progressed from a refuge to ...

    Sep 3, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Cute Dagashiya Story

    Hi! I hope you are having a good day or night! Outlines are very important in regard to writing your story. I think you've done quite the job in summarizing ...

    Sep 3, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: It ended at Midnight -Chapter 5

    Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! This story has taken quite a turn, one I would not have expected upon the first chapter. (Though, that ...

    Sep 2, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Supernatural Re: It ended at Midnight -Chapter 4

    Hello! I hope you are having a fantastic day or night! Straight off the bat, there's a lot to like about this chapter. I like how swiftly your story moves, ...

    Aug 20, 2022


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