Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
First Impression: This is a very interesting reply here. I like that it isn't exactly overwhelming positive but rather seems to be focusing more towards actually having this person confront these horrors better and take those baby steps towards a more positive note. Its a much more realistic response this way.
Anyway let's get right to it,
I received your letter. I have started writing a diary. It still hurts to know my sister is not with me anymore. Reflections of her come into my eyes every so often, and it's not like I’ve been talking to many people or eating well.
I have to admit, I have grown a certain distrust with your book. I forced myself to hate that book. I started thinking, ‘this stupid kids’ book isn’t going to help me get ahead of this’ after I started visiting my friends. I mean, the way we snapped together — me and Kathy, that’s been missing for the past few days. All my friends tell me is they’re so sorry and so sympathetic for me because my sister died and they think that they feel my pain. The kids who used to bully me now suddenly want to be friends with me – apparently as they were cool to have that dead girl’s sister as their friend. I don’t like this, no, it makes me sick to the bone. Why can’t they let me be on my own terms — not being reminded of my sister’s tragic and early death?
Okayy that seems like an interesting little development there. The diary seems like a solid little step in a positive direction although what follows there seems like it might have been a little bit of a spiral for Susan here with her friend situation really not going towards the better side. The distaste for the book seems natural at that point even though it is a bit of a negative.
Today, as your letter came in the mail, I finally got hold of your book again. I skimmed through the pages and found nothing fun, until my fingers grabbed the fifth chapter. It was really interesting. I liked how you wrote about the girl somewhat coming to terms with being alone as is, but she still refuses to stop the search for her sister. I could see myself in her place, the woods being the many hospitals Julia’s been to — specialists of this, specialists of that, specialists of those. I never understood any of the medical words that the doctors used, but my innocent mind told me - ‘the doctor means Julia will be okay”.
Hmm this is an interesting turn. So it seems that little spiral was happening right before the letter came and it does look like there has been a few more positive things to come from said letter since its arrival.
I became so curious about cancers, spending hours gazing at the cancer section in the encyclopedias in the small library near me. Every book told me that the disease was fatal and whoever had it was doomed to die an early and brutal death. My tender heart was neither ready nor accepting of this idea. I should have learnt to trust the books and cry these rivers — at least I would’ve been prepared, right?
But, who can be prepared for an older sister’s death — I never was, and never will be. But, at least I have you, and I at least have Mom. But, everything around me seems superficial — like I don’t belong here. I sometimes think about helping out the world by simply ceasing to trouble the world with my presence — and it’s only who she was, my dear Julia, who’s given me the ounce of confidence to live one more day.
Oooh this is definitely turning towards the positive thing. Even as Susan here does seem to be struggling to fully cope and understand the scope of this horror, it seems she's also interested in knowing more about this disease and seems perhaps ready to learn more about its horrors and understand them better.
I understand, the world moves on and you move on. You can’t and shouldn’t expect the world to stop because you want them to. The world will be there, you will be there and you can’t change. What you can do is cherish your choices and live like its meant to be.
I’m going out more often, I think I need more fresh air as it stands.
This definitely seems like a positive note to end on even though I am a little disappointed that there doesn't seem to necessarily be all that much for The Guide here to respond to. It doesn't seem like Susan quite wants to have a conversation here and given this doesn't seem to have any chapters beyond it, I wonder if this is where this ends.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
Overall: Overall another solid followup here. I can honestly say this kind of actually works as a decent little ending. It just about final enough to be a little ending to a shorter story but it does feel like there could be more and I honestly want to see more here.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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