HopelesslyandIrrevocably

YAY FIRST TO COMMENT! LOVE YOUR WRITIN GIRL! keep it up! :) :) thanks for posting again! :) -Maggie

I believe that all i wanted to say to help was said already. i would just like you to know that this is the most amazing fantasy writing, or even ...

Alila....this is the most insanely awesome story I have ever read....and i swear that i am not just saying that...i am honestly in shock. This is better than any book, ...

ROSE PLEASE TELL ME WHO THE HECK YOU LIKE!!!! :( :( I TELL YOU EVERYTHING AND YOU KNOW IT!!!! NAME ONE THING THAT I HAVEN"T TOLD YOU IN THE LAST ...

OMG!!!!!!!!!! This is perfect. Absolutley PERFECT. I know how you feel, I kinda have the same situation going on right now.... here are somethings that i noticed (i am just ...

I can totally relate! just a couple things i want to point out... "Beyond the door there it is, past the precipice your foot falls, and the private world is ...

HEY HEY CASEY! I DIDN'T KNOW YOU WROTE POETRY! This was really good and I definitly think it could be perfect with a couple of adjustments. To be honest, I ...

Roie. Roie. Roie. OMFGHWHYDIDN'TYOUTELLMETHATYOUCOULDWRITELIKETHIS? this is SERIOUSLY incredible! Why didn't I know about this? But dahling, as hard as it may be, i noticed a few errors : "The car ...

This is just really awesome! But since I already told you how much I love it yesterday, I want to point out a couple of things : "and though i ...

Wow. I think that this is a really sweet poem, but you know what would make this poem a gazillion times better? If you added on. I can tell that ...

Ok, there is something about the way that you framed everything that just gave me this PERFECT picture of what the girl looked like and the guy she was with. ...

This is very powerful. And it was all throughout the poem, until we hit the VERY last line: "I would rather respected for my mind Than ogled for forged beauty." ...

Hey ray ray! as i said last night, this writing is INCREDIBLE! with a little editing i think that all of the poem's that you showed me could be published ...

Hello! I love this story and i can't wait to see where it goes! You can bet i will be watching for the next chapter, this prologue definetly got me ...

Hey heyz! Ok, i am gonna try to be as mean as possible! (I have trouble being serious with reveiws) But I have to say that i have to agree ...