HopelessAbandon

Hey! Here for a quick review. I didn't see anything really grammatically wrong with it. :) So far pretty excellent! It was just a teensy bit awkward at the beginning, ...

Ello! Hope here. I read your chapter one, and was planning on keeping up with it to review more. >.< I'm sorry for the delay, I was gone all weekend, ...

Hi! Here to review! I comment on random things as I read, and then make overall statements at the end. :) damn front"med techs and nurses looking at me and ...

Hi! Here for a review! I comment as I read, and then make overall comments at the end, just to let you know how this whole thing is goin' down. ...

Hi! Here for a quick review! I read your first short story that relates to this, and I just wanted to say I really like it! A humming preoccupied my ...

Hi! Here for a review! I'll just jump right in with a few nitpicks, then finish up with overall comments. :) Well, to say that would make you feel sad ...

Hi! Hope here for a quick review! First off, I love minecraft, so when I saw the title, I was like *gasp* NO WAY. Anyway. Onto a couple critiques! There ...

Hi! Glad to see you've updated this! I know you mentioned it before, but I haven't had a ton of time to get back to it. :) Okay, so you've ...

Alright, my first comment has to do with the actual plot itself. Have you ever heard of the Maximum Ride series by James Patterson? Because this is almost exactly the ...

Here for another review! I always try to read the various comments people before me have said, so that I make sure not to repeat anything, and I had to ...

Hi! I see you've got a lot of other reviews on this, so I'll try to keep mine short. I wanted to ask though, I didn't see a chapter 19 ...

Hi! Here again! Suddenly a figure appeared out of the haze that clouded his vision to an odd blur and stepped over to him. Did the figure appear in an ...

Hi! Here again! I and my friends were looking for you. "My friends and I" What are you doing to do with me?” "Going" instead of "doing" Tauren chucked mentally, ...

Hi! Back for another review! :) The practical man, or not! This should end with a question mark. saw Vajik looking down at him, he looked remarkably This should be ...

Hi! Here for another review. The world seemed to pause as the wind savored the taste of blood vaporizing in its calmness This was a confusing sentence... the blood was ...