Hope19

I loved this poem! It was so great. I really enjoyed reading it. It had such feeling emotion to it. It felt like you really know what you are talking ...

This is a very in depth poem. I think it has potential. It's kind of sad though. I liked your descriptiveness. You do need to capitalize your " I". I ...

Very beautiful. I really loved it. Dreams are such beautiful things. Everybody has a dream and they should never let go of their dreams. I loved the parts of crashing ...

Good. Really good. I found it to have a great passion. I could see you wrote with a passion. Really enjoyable piece. I loved your adjectives. They made this piece ...

Really nice. It was nice. I didn't really understand it very well. I felt like you used some words a little too much. When I looked at description, I got ...

Really cool. I enjoyed the melody and rhyming. It was a very sweet song. Thank you. I found it to beautiful in the verses and the chorus. I also write ...

Really cute poem. I enjoyed it. A very sweet, childlike poem. That's how I found it to be. I found it to be found of sweet, childhood memories. I think ...

I liked your poem. You had form to it. I didn't care for how you worded it and how you set it up. That may just me. I prefer capitalizing, ...

Very sweet for a song. Probably not a poem. I see it as a song, but that's me. I like write songs and poetry. I find there is a difference ...

Really nice. I enjoyed it. This is true. People do like the happy ending. I do like happy endings, but at the same time I like things to be realistic. ...

I did not expect the ending. My heart skipped a beat. Seriously. Very good. You did a good job on that. I was so much in the romance that I ...

Very Good. I enjoyed it. It was very dramatic and it was pierced with darkness. I normally don't use that. lol. Anyway, the story was very good indeed. I find ...

Hey. Beautiful poem. I really enjoyed it. It had a wonderful and pleasant meaning. I loved the story. How someone wants to fly. We all want to fly sometime or ...

Hey. I liked the idea of your poem. I liked the beginning. Talking about the girl. It had a pretty point to it. Your rhyming also was good in the ...

Very Pretty. I found the story intriguing. As I read and read, it made me want to read more. A story should really do that. I feel it was a ...