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Re: Servant of the White Sun - Chapter 1 - Shelter of the Sun
:D I will definitely tell you what I think about it in future chapters!
Apr 5, 2019 -
Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 1.1
Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate the help! I will take what you said with me when I keep on writing. I have had people tell ...
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Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 3
Thank you! :)
Apr 5, 2019 -
Re: Dirty Town - Song
Wow...this was really good. I listened to it and it gave me chills! You sounds REALLY good! I am totally blown away! :D :D
Apr 4, 2019 -
Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 2.2
Thank you for reviewing this! Is there any chance you can tell me what I repeated? Just so I know? I would appreciate it! :D
Apr 4, 2019 -
Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 1.2
Thank you! :)
Apr 4, 2019 -
Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 2.1
Soon! I promise! (Probably tonight it tomorrow) ;)
Apr 3, 2019 -
Re: lover
Sounds good! :)
Apr 3, 2019 -
Re: movement
still must suck!
Apr 3, 2019 -
Re: lover
I am quite religious. Not is a creepy way though XD I just believe in God, the Devil, Heaven and Hell. You know? If you ever want to ask me ...
Apr 3, 2019 -
Re: Bonetaker Chapter 1 and 2
Say it in a way that you just described it to me. Add the word sarcastic somewhere in there. Maybe put his thinking in italics too. It would make it ...
Apr 3, 2019 -
Re: Bonetaker Chapter 1 and 2
Yeah it did! Thank you! Maybe just rephrase it so your readers get it! ;)
Apr 3, 2019 -
Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 1.2
Sounds good! Thank you for reading :) I love your avatar btw
Apr 3, 2019 -
Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 1.2
Thank you for the review! I will definitely keep this stuff in mind in my future chapters! :) It all comes later how he knows her name. :D That's a ...
Apr 3, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 1 Wis-per
Ok never mind. I've never read them but it has been on my list to read! I started the first one once but it was in a bookstore and I ...
Apr 3, 2019
