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Honora

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1: Gone

    Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I really liked this as a first chapter; it really got me hooked because I would KILL whoever did it if I was in his/her ...

    Mar 5, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Literature Re: Resist or Regret (Ch.3)

    Hey Tiny! I am back once again and what is hilariously scary, is that the more I read, the more I see myself in Cici. It's a little bit scary. ...

    Mar 5, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 3

    Hey Cecy! I decided to review this one since I haven't actually read it yet.... To start, I'm glad you decided to elaborate on how her "gang" actually started. Before, ...

    Mar 2, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Singularity, Ch. 3: On Fatigue

    Hey Alex! Back for another review! I will just mention the few things that I picked up on and hopefully it will help you out. Something that I found very ...

    Mar 2, 2019
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Lyrical Re: Greyscale

    Hey Smuggg! I'm going to warn you that I don't know ANYTHING about poetry so this is an amateur's review... Well, I really liked it. It just spoke a dark ...

    Mar 2, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: ORWEO (Working Title) 2.2

    Hey Tuck! I'm back for some more! Once again, I didn't find much wrong and it was well done. A few spelling mistakes but you will catch them when you ...

    Mar 2, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Love is a lie : Chapter one!

    Hey there! Here for a review! :) I will start off with the mistakes that I found so that I can leave you on a happy, positive note! I found ...

    Mar 1, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Stratagem ~ Chapter 1

    Hello Gummy! So I like what you have written so far but I'm having a hard time deciding what time era you are writing in. Also, I noticed that you ...

    Feb 26, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Dramatic Re: Shadows In The Dark~ Chapter 1

    Hey Grace! I like the way you write! You really made it easy to feel the fear she was feeling as she went in. Something that it needs is some ...

    Feb 26, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: The Monster

    Hey there! I really enjoyed this was very well done and is definitely relatable! It can be taken in so many different points of views that almost anyone would be ...

    Feb 24, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Atravesar

    Hey Smuggg! Just thought I’d check this out so here I am! I am going to start by saying that it is a bit hard to follow. I had to ...

    Feb 24, 2019
  • Other » Narrative, General Re: Secret Place

    Hey imaginer2018! Your writing is really good and it flowed well. I can pretty well relate to what you say about her "secret place" and I do it all the ...

    Feb 24, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Forever Yours...

    So basically....I forgot to post this as a review so here I am again!! Hopefully this is actually long enough to be a review but I guess I'll see! Hey ...

    Feb 24, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Curse Of The Midnight Melody: Chapter One

    Hey Rose! Overall, the story is good, the grammar is fine, but I did pick up on a few things that I'll point out to you :) 1) 'It's never ...

    Feb 23, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Singularity, Ch. 2: On Still Moments

    Hey Alex! I'm back again for another review! I am glad to say that this chapter is just as interesting as the last. Most of your writing is very well ...

    Feb 23, 2019


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