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Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 12
Hey there Cecy! I told you I’d get to reviewing your work eventually so here I am! I hope I don’t give you any offence and that what I say ...
Jun 11, 2019 -
Re: Servant of the White Sun - Chapter 4 - Shelter of the Sun
Hey Pap! I'm going to say that I am very surprised that this hasn't had a review before mine! I mean, come on YWSers! This book is amazing! ;) Also, ...
Jun 11, 2019 -
Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 11
Hey Cecy! I haven’t reviewed any of your stuff and you have been reviewing all mine so here I am! I will try review it on a regular basis! ;) ...
May 24, 2019 -
Re: Fallen Soul- Chapter One
Hey Starry!! Wow...this is so good. I couldn’t tell you if I found anything wrong with this. Whether there is or not, I have no clue. Your writing just completely ...
May 24, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 5: Willow
Hey Mira! I'm glad I got a chance to read your last two chapters today. I can't say I'm disappointed! :D :D :D :D :D I didn't find much to ...
May 22, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 4: Flames
Hi! Sorry it's taken me so long to read and review! I've been slacking off but I'm trying to get back into the habit of being on here! Anyway, review ...
May 22, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 3: Climb
Hey Mira! Sorry for taking so long to review! Better late than never right? ;) Ok, on to the review. The biggest thing i noticed is that you switch the ...
May 7, 2019 -
Re: Should we still pray?
Hey 4revgreen! So I'm going to start off by saying that I don't think God enjoys killing. Killing is such a harsh word for it too. Killing is more of ...
Apr 30, 2019 -
Re: Wis-per (Chapter 9)
Hey Anma! I'm really sorry I haven't reviewed this before now! I've just been really busy! :( Anyway, review time! In the first paragraph, "The boy's hand was still in ...
Apr 30, 2019 -
Re: Come back
Hi FireSpyGirl! This poem is really deep. I find anyways. It speaks of so much emotion and truth that I'm sure a lot of people can relate to. It's never ...
Apr 30, 2019 -
Re: Servant of the White Sun - Chapter 3 - Shelter of the Sun
Hi papillote! Sorry for not reviewing this earlier! :) This is just as good as the last ones. I must say you have me hooked. ;) I have a few ...
Apr 29, 2019 -
Re: Your Lies
Hello kira!:) This was quite touching. It was really relatable and flowed really well. I think it is really nice because everyone goes through stuff like this at some point ...
Apr 12, 2019 -
Re: Leaving Blue
Wow...4revgreen. I seriously don't know how you make your writing so relatable. This poem hit me hard. I find it very truthful and kind of sad in a way. I'm ...
Apr 12, 2019 -
Re: Wis-per Chapter 8
Hey Anma! Very good! I like it! I didn't notice any errors but just double-check! Just to be sure! I have a few questions though (unless they will be answered ...
Apr 12, 2019 -
Re: Love and Lies (Chapter 1)
Hey Anma! I'm liking where this is going...even though I have NO idea where it actually is going lol. What can I say? I'm a sucker for bad boys. ;) ...
Apr 12, 2019
