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Re: Borderline
Hello! Thank you for sharing your story! I really like the opening of this story- it reads like a poem, which I think you intended! At first I was a ...
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Re: Paths Crossed chapter 10
Hey! Happy Review Day!! Wow, that was a wild ride! I did not expect to be so into this chapter- usually when I jump in on a chapter in the ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: Oh My Word
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Jul 20, 2020
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Re: a question to society part one
Hello! I'd love to give you a review today- I think I will!! I enjoy works like this, where I get to think about the questions and concerns kinda being ...
Jul 17, 2020 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Frozen Past - Chapter Twenty Two
Hello there! I have this strong feeling that I've read and reviewed one of the chapters in this series before... but I'm not sure! I think your strength is descriptions ...
Jul 14, 2020 -
Re: The Last Words of Rory the Fourth
Hey there! I decided to stop by and give your work a review! It seems like this is part of a bigger project/story, which is awesome! I could tell you ...
Jul 13, 2020 -
Re: Lockdown Part 6.1
Hello! It's interesting to see that you were inspired to write a story about a pandemic, I'm guessing that's due to the current state of the world! I have to ...
May 5, 2020 -
Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 19.1)
Hello! I have to admit now that this was really well written, and that being aid, I'm struggling to think of things to critique! Not too many chapter 19's make ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: A Lifetime (Chapter Four)
Hey there! Just so you know, I have not read the previous chapters- I'm just going off of what's in this one, and trying to keep my critique relevant to ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Love Part 6
Hello! Happy Review Day! c: Oh man, I remember those days of have UNBEARABLE crushes on people and just not being able to think of anything but them constantly! I ...
Mar 31, 2020 -
Re: A lovers Disagreement.
Hello! Happy Review Day! c: This was definitely pretty creepy and invoked a lot of thought within me about various things including about how people who are in abusive relationships ...
Mar 31, 2020 -
Re: The Successor, The Fall of Morrow (2)
Hello! C: Wow! This is a pretty cool chapter. It definitely left me wanting to know what would happen next- and I especially was excite about meeting this Fuyus guy, ...
Mar 31, 2020 -
Re: How Do You Plead: 6.1
Hey CaptainJack! Well I was not expecting this when I walked in here! I really should start noticing ratings more, haha. Overall I feel like this chapter/part held up pretty ...
Mar 31, 2020 -
Re: Butterfly Wings - Chapter 4 - Rise
Hello there! I thought I'd stop by to help rescue your work from the Green Room! This was definitely an interesting read! You have a really fun, distinct way of ...
Mar 31, 2020 -
Re: Deleted
Hey there, Dossereana! I'm trying to get back into the reviewing game, and thought I'd start with your chapter! c: Something I thought was worth noting is that I got ...
Jan 16, 2020
