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I have been behind in my reading, but I am back at it again trying to go strong. So, I cant really complain, nor complement because this work is the ...

Let me just say this..............................I LOVED IT! Man you way with words is incomparable. You have a gift and after reading just this small insert I want more. I am ...

So Title....Check, Poem...Check, and Rhythm.....check. So you got all the right things for this poem to be great. You have a catchy title name, you follow a great poem structure ...

Well Tyger eye ..... for this to just be a rough draft I liked it a lot. I wish that there was more elaboration on the parents but I am ...

LOl, once again........you never cease to amaze me. This story defiantly sent chills down my spine and made it wiggle like a worm on a hook. But never the less ...

Great story, I loved how you wrote this story. My question is will there be more? I love a good read and this is defiantly a really good read. I ...

Okay, It's not heartbeat academy, but all and all you might have wrote another great story. I was on the edge of my seat the entire time I read your ...

Okay Tuesday.......I am here with another review. This chapter to me was a little more hard to read. It was like you forcing it a bit, and I had to ...

.........creepy, but overall a good read. I really felt the pain and agony that poor baby went through. You remind me of my friend up here who also writes these ...

Lol, I bazaar poem but overall well written. Each stanza contain a certain essence and that is key when writing a poem. I like how you started off with the ...

Lol, a question that is often asked I will agree with you there. So Ms. Creativity what is the point of caring on if life isn't going right? Should we ...

Lol, well there you have it. The conclusion what in my opinion was a beautiful trilogy. I don't know if a lot of people got it but I think I ...

SO as I read this the dialogue it self was of a different world. As you have two kings coming together trying to figure out the true meaning of Justice. ...

Okay, this story intrigues me in a certain way, which is good. You see you start off with a secrete and by making me know its a secrete makes me ...

LOl, see....This is a chapter that I like. It contains all the juices that an actual chapter should have. I loved the suspense at the end as well. Good touch. ...