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Re: Stop the Rewind: Chapter 6
Sure, ive never been tagged before!
Jan 15, 2017 -
Re: Kinetic Crusade Chapter 7 Gemini Jungle
Thanks again! And im not annoyed by you pointing about the emotion part cuz that lets me know that most of these other chapters need a bit more emotion just ...
Jan 14, 2017 -
Re: Kinetic Crusade Chapter 3 Boruto Town
Thanks for all the reviews on these chapters and im looking forward to your next one, and there maybe romance but im not going to get specific, its all planned ...
Jan 13, 2017 -
Re: Part 1 Chapter 1
Hey Hikaru here with a review. "As it was long before, food had become the main source of struggle. With the absence of life, plants were unable to grow. In ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Kinetic Crusade Chapter 6 Green Claw
Hey thks for the review, i just fixed some of the issues. And thanks for pointing out some of the past tense errors, which is the best to write in ...
Dec 28, 2016 -
Re: Song of the Long War now Gone
Cool that would give me a chance to try poetrt and see how well i am in that subject :D
Dec 19, 2016 -
Re: The Guardians
Kinda disappointed ;-;
Dec 5, 2016 -
Re: Kinetic Crusade Chapter 3 Boruto Town
Thanks, this really fixed a some problems i didnt see before!
Dec 5, 2016 -
Re: Kinetic Crusade Prologue Harmona History
Wow thank you for this review, this is gonna help me with parts of the story that are tied to this history prologue, and thanks for the 3 stars too!
Dec 5, 2016 -
Re: The Narcissist
This was really neat to read and im hoping you do a positive characteristic next, maybe a optimist next or a pessimist. Also these could be longer if you write ...
Dec 4, 2016 -
Re: Kinetic Crusade Chapter 2 Sewer Snowflakes
Oh wow thanks for pointing out the errors and little details i put in, this chapter hasnt been reviewed until now so this really helps thank you!
Dec 4, 2016 -
Re: Visions ; Introduction + Chapter One [PT1]
I agree with kappaphime, this isnt a genre I'd read normally but to people who ate looking for a story that has the thinking then they should come and read ...
Nov 29, 2016 -
Re: Epilogue to a Story that I May Add More to. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
I really hope you continue this story, this epilogue is a good way to start such a serious story like this.
Nov 29, 2016
