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HikariHateke

  • Poetry » General, Action / Adventure Re: the road of memories

    I'm not really sure how to feel about this since i don't usually write this type of poem, I'll probably improve it later

    Oct 21, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mother Earth

    Hi there kari here with a review! Oh this is amazing! I like how you did one for each season and then the last one is just in general? Each ...

    Nov 30, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Stinging Tang

    Sep 23, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: No Longer Flowing

    Sep 15, 2021
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Scroll That is History

    Hi! Kari here with a review! Oml I loved this song much! 'While some is pristine, Some’s covered in mud.' I think this lines my favorite it just flows so ...

    Aug 21, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Dragon Thief

    Oh this was an awesome read I loved it! The description of the library! (I love library's so much! I think I'd live in one forever if I could!) Oh ...

    Aug 12, 2021
  • Short Story » General, General Re: To Buy Bread

    How do I tell a mod? Cuz my thing keeps glitching

    Aug 8, 2021
  • Short Story » General, General Re: To Buy Bread

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    Hey Kari here with a review! This was a good read, it sorta reminded me of the boxcar children in a way. Though I noticed that amy could say 'lion' ...

    Aug 8, 2021
  • Short Story » General, General Re: To Buy Bread

    Note: This review has been deleted
    Hey Kari here with a review! This was a good read, it sorta reminded me of the boxcar children in a way. Though I noticed that amy could say 'lion' ...

    Aug 8, 2021
  • Short Story » General, General Re: To Buy Bread

    Note: This review has been deleted
    Hey Kari here with a review! This was a good read, it sorta reminded me of the boxcar children in a way. Though I noticed that amy could say 'lion' ...

    Aug 8, 2021
  • Short Story » General, General Re: To Buy Bread

    Oh oops is there any way to edit it into a review or should I just copy and paste?

    Aug 7, 2021
  • Short Story » General, General Re: To Buy Bread

    Note: This review has been deleted
    Hey Kari here with a review! This was a good read, it sorta reminded me of the boxcar children in a way. Though I noticed that amy could say 'lion' ...

    Aug 3, 2021
  • Poetry » Horror, Lyrical Re: To the Forest

    Ah my bad with the spelling -I was spelling it the first way but figured autocorrect was right, (lol of course it wasnt)- my grammar isn't the best as I ...

    Jul 31, 2021
  • Poetry » Horror, Lyrical Re: To the Forest

    I think I actually fixed it just now if ya wanna re-read?

    Jul 31, 2021
  • Poetry » Horror, Lyrical Re: To the Forest

    Hey thx for the review! I honestly thought about how that line needed a comma but wasn't sure if it would ruin what I was doing with it ya know? ...

    Jul 30, 2021


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