HetaliaSpain

Good work. I enjoyed reading your poem. It was quiet interesting. I like it how you put in that you play games with your shadow...that's sweet. :D I could imagine ...

The concept is good. I enjoyed reading it, and teenagers can relate to the concept, and many of them would agree. I don't wear makeup, except for eyeshadow and lipstick/lip ...

I sensed emotion in this, though I would prefer it to be more of a story than a my opinion, it would be better without the way you ended it ...

It's good, yet it feels like there is something missing. I look for complete and clearly painted pictures, and it was clear, but it didn't seem complete to me, and ...

This was amazing! :D :) :D I really enjoyed this poem, and it truly speaks about a lot of people. It was simple, yet very expressive of what some people ...

Annii - The story was very interesting, and I can't wait for part two! It kept me reading, and I could really imagine the characters. I look for the works ...

Demoness - It's a very entertaining poem...the sense of rhyme and rhythm is present in the poem as well. I really enjoyed reading it. Everything in this poem is absolutely ...

#2: Review: The poem was well written and was full of many descriptive adjectives. I enjoyed how you had the seeds of the dandelion be blown around and be able ...

Great job. I really enjoyed reading it. It was full of life and emotion. Keep writing! ~HetaliaSpain XD