HessicaJolt

I really like this. I'm thinking and what popped into my mind was someone trying to be skinny, and its killing her inside. Like agh, I can't think of the ...

Creative! I love simple poems like this, but unfortunately the only things that I planned to critique you on were already critiqued by ones who came before me. I love ...

I really like this poem. As a matter of fact so far I like all of your poems. But in this one I have a bit of a problem. You ...

To simply put it, it was somewhat boring. I expected something much more grotesque and interesting. I actually expected a necrophiliac image because of the title...Maybe you meant something else, ...

This gave me chills. Its beautiful and I think that any real Christian can relate to this. There are literally tears in my eyes. I'm so glad there are people ...

This is very....different. I'm really liking your work so far, but this is quite.. confusing. I'm drawing a blank on this one. This sort of sounds like something I would ...

I was bi-curious quite a while ago, after getting hurt badly by this one guy. But, of course my dad is the Holy Christian man and talked of hell and ...

I love this poem! I think its because I can relate to it so much, and even though it doesn't rhyme constantly it flows PERFECTLY. I have nothing to critique ...

Great job! Very, very emotional, and you pointed out your feelings very well. The only thing that I noticed was this ;D but it only makes my veins bleed faster, ...

I like how everyone was reeled in cleverly with the title. Great job! It ran very smoothly, so it was nicely written. I liked it very much, and I have ...

Great job! I didn't seen anything that you could fix other than putting commas and semi-colons and all that chiz that no one actually likes doing ;) Great job! Loved ...

I read it very quickly at first, and then went to critique it. I didn't quite get its meaning, but after reading it a second time, It came to me. ...

I think you will get farther with this story if you explain more. I read in one of the comments that you said that this is something your going through, ...

This is a pretty good poem, and it rolls off my tongue smoothly, but I must say some things just didn't make any sense. It left me a little confused. ...

I imagined someone reading this with a very assertive and angry tone. It made me laugh. I love it when people can capture their feelings while making it creative. It ...