Helena13

Haha! Thank you so so much! I've probably been writing for about a month. Anyway, thanks.

I'm sorry. Never mind.

What if her mom blames her for it and her mom never even considers what she feels? What if the s sounds are just in everyday speech and they bother ...

Blood? Pain? Pen? Zombie?! I actually don't know... ;-;

This was something I wrote after hearing someone say 'I'm so OCD' about cleaning their room. I got all information from personal experience. I wasn't aware of the two parts ...

I am confuzzled! Am I a cinnamon roll, too? :D

This is an AMAZING story. I can't wait to read more!!!! I have no critique since you're ten times better at writing than me. Anyway, please write more? I'm hooked!!!

Just..awwww...

I loved this! It's short, sweet, and simple! One thing that I'd like to advise- please note that I'm not exactly good at poetry or any writing, so...- Even though ...

This is very relatable! The idea that adults tend to tell children exactly which path to take. Even if they say 'I want you to do what makes you happy', ...

He didn't end his own life, but he probably would have if he could. Anyway, thank you so so much for the feedback. The reason Maria didn't take him in ...

Thank you so much! That was the feeling I was trying to go for. It's not really to open anyone's eyes to such things, but I guess that's what it ...

Thank you so much for the feedback! Their parents passed away so they only have each other. That's why the main character has to pull the plug. I agree with ...

I read this once. Then I read this twice. Finally, I laughed. This was amazing! This is simple, fun, and well written. Each stanza makes me laugh more and more. ...

I adore your use of bold and Italics to stress important words! This poem made me think about many things. Each line I read made me feel as if the ...