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Hello ! What a bittersweet poem we have here. I liked it! The way the poetic voice describe themselves into this powerful poem makes way to great feelings. Your use ...

Wow I'm quacking, in shock, in love whatever these feelings are. Your poem is incredible. I'm going to be a bit picky because your poem is already gorgeous. You set ...

Hi there! Your poem seemed a little lonely in the green room... What an original poem! You have a very intriguing way of writing. If your poem was a painting ...

I'll invent a challenge for myself called the weekly Lady Spark review. This one, at the moment, is my favorite. I can't say this enough: the way you write your ...

What a nice poem! I'm happy you write about this subject and your own views about it. You really succeeded in encapsulating the pain of womanhood. What it is to ...

Wow this was a powerful piece. I will first offer some critiques and then move on to what I liked. So! First, I think it would need a bit more ...

Hi!! This: was a great poem. You packed so many emotions in a few sentences which does two things: -It impacts us much more but -It is also a bit ...

OKAY! First of all: it was a great short story! I will explain why I liked it after. I tried taking little passages to comment on but then I got ...

Okay Emily Dickinson! Just kidding, you have a clear poetic voice of yourself! The words you use seem handpicked and it shows that you care about your craft - or ...

This is a very unique poem and I'm in love with it. Everything seems so orderly, harmonic and balanced. You give an insight to your own beliefs, your own views ...

Hullo there! I decided to read the three experiences and then make a big review. You seem in your poems to describe moments that stick to you. And I think ...

After reading your poem I can say that you have a very creative poetic voice. From the words you use to the way you describe the environment, everything feels personal, ...

Hi! I've found your poem in the depth of the green room and I'm happy I did. You are telling us here a deep and emotional story, one that feels ...

Witty, funny, fresh and complete, this poem was a delight to read! First, I do understand the tiredness that can lead to the creation of those images but, the way ...

Your poem defnitely comes from a deep place within yourself, but you conquered it, brought it back to the surface and sublimed it- and for this, I must congratulate you. ...