Hello there! I might be late for the party but who cares, I love your writings! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to review/comment about your poem. I see it was posted on the date you freshly entered the site. And it is pretty good for a poem by a freshly new young writer that has entered.
it is good that the poem rhymes like the pattern abab. The poem's message makes you think a lot. It reminds me of my thoughts whenever I go to bed and try to sleep but my brain has these types of thoughts. What happens after living? It is good too that it feels like an old poem I would read in school.
Over all, it was great to read such a poem. Keep it up! Have a nice day/night!
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