HazelGrace16

Hello pal HazelGrace16 here for a review! First off...wow. Second off...wow. *takes deep breath* Sorry had to get that off my chest haha. Anyways, I'll be somewhat serious now. I ...

Hello! HazelGrace16 here for a little review. First off, I want to say that this poem was very well done. I am not too keen on my technical poetry knowledge, ...

This was so adorable! This is the kind of writing that even if you had grammar problems I wouldn't notice/care. The story was well done, and it gave us enough ...

First. Welcome to YWS, and you did fine. We all have our first post. Second. I'm terrible at reviews so try not to hate me haha. It wasn't great, but ...

Very well done! That's all I can say. The poetry has great flow, and the interpretations that can be made are up to the reader. You are giving your readers ...

A harsh reality being brought into the light. Nice. The sad thing is I know girls like this. Its sad to think that some people don't really think about the ...

I'm not the best at doing reviews so here it goes. I really enjoyed reading this piece, but due to the fact that I had no prior knowledge to the ...

only description is wow. It has been a long time since I have read a piece of writing that has hit me as much as this one has. As a ...

Well, its hard to be harsh with a piece like that. Great job. I love the story that was being told, and the flow of the poem was fantastic. I'm ...

Well, I want to start off by saying thank you. Your poem basically just made my day. It was cliche and short, but it brought a smile to my face. ...

I'm not really sure I understand the message/ tale being written here. I guess its because it's not finished? Anyways you've got potential here for a funny story if you ...

This was really funny! I liked that it shared similar elements with the one from the Hillywood Show on Youtube. Both were equally clever, and witty. I must say though ...

Short and sweet, but so hard hitting. Its poems like this that really make me excited about writing, and other writers. It doesn't have to have a lot of detail, ...

I really loved this piece. Overall my only huge complaint would have to be the flow at times. I for one have never written a script before so I guess ...

Wow! That was really good, and really intriguing. You leave your readers wanting more. For instance I want to know about the accident, her relationships with the mystery people, her ...