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Hey, Aley! I'ven't reviewed in ages but saw this and it didn't look too long and it was the first chapter and recently posted and all and yay, so you ...

HEY HOLY. I opened this 'cause you tagged me to read it, but I was a bit tired and was gonna save it for tomorrow. I ended up reading the ...

Hattable here! So, first off, welcome to YWS! Secondly, this grammar, man. You're missing punctuation all over the place, some spelling is off, and caps isn't really necessary or recommended ...

Hey, Cello! I saw your call for help, hoping to free this from the Green Room (hopefully I've made it before anyone else >.> :p) I don't have much to ...

Hey, Jericho! Hatt here for a review! Now, I don't review much and I'ven't done so recently, so I apologize if this is absolute rubbish. I saw you were asking ...

Hey there, Axioss! Hattable here to review your seemingly first posted story. Speaking of which, welcome to YWS! Now, I'm mainly going to be blathering on about grammar mistakes and ...

I listened to YMCA while reading this to get the... thing... (tone? beat? tune? eh) right. :p As you said, some words don't seem natural, but I can't think of ...

Hey Falco! What d'you know? I was hoping to find something by you to review and as soon as I open the Green Room I spot this! :D I quite ...

Hey there... Smiles! Yeah, yeah, I'll call you Smiles... *ahem* I'ven't exactly reviewed in... quite a while... So I might be a bit rusty. Never was any good in the ...

Yes. Another. Review! *holds up hand for a high-five* Come on, don't leave me hanging... Okay... *drops hand* So, I finally saw a grammatical error! I can actually be useful ...

*hops in* Ah, another review! :D As with before, I didn't notice any grammatical errors or misspellings (though I may have missed some). Your story here was quite something. I ...

Hey Falco! I'm finally here for a review. Sorry it took me so long to get to your portfolio. >.< Anyway, I didn't spot a single misspelling or other grammatical ...

I suppose I might as well review this and help save it from the green room, right? So, honestly, this confused me at first. I thought it actually was a ...

Hi Chaser! Jules here for a review. Firstly, this was a great piece. I really liked it and hope to read more; I'm definitely going to follow this story. I ...

Hi Holy. I'm finally trying to start reviewing again! XD Anyway, I really liked this, especially your descriptions of war and hockey :P (But seriously, describing war like that really ...