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Hello Alex. Nice to see a Man Utd fan over here :) I liked this article but there were some grammatical errors. Some sentences need better punctuation. Also, a few ...

Wow. This was..just..so...epic!!! I usually hate violence and gore and blood and anything to do with it, but this was epic. This was very well written. It had me hooked ...

This was a different poem. The kind I don't really understand, but enjoy a lot. I liked how you played with the words. The way you compared the opening of ...

Welcome to YWS! I'm not a big fan of non-rhyming poetry, but this, this I really liked. The start and end of a poem is always very important. The first ...

WOW! This was amazing. I loved how you split the poem in two mirrored stanzas. They linked each other very well. The extra space between the "break" in the first ...

Welcome to YWS! I really liked this poem. It wasn't exactly fast or anything, but the flow was well maintained. I loved the last line. It ended the poem beautifully. ...

I can't really say that I know how you feel, because I don't. The closest thing to a house-arrest situation that I have encountered is the city being closed and ...

Can I just start by saying how absolutely amazing this poem was. Wow! I'm not a big fan of free verse or anything that doesn't rhyme properly. But this just ...

Helloo there. This was a very...vindictive poem. The theme didnt take long to set into the reader's mind. What was great about this poem was, that even though the hate/ ...

This is... weird...ehh.. How can one review this .____. I will make an attempt at this. Heloo. I'll be honest here. The title did not make me read this poem, ...

Wow! I love the way the poem transitions from the sweet kid adoring the father to the hate-filled version. I can relate to this very well. I didn't like the ...

I liked the vibe this poem possessed. The title is what drew me in. Although the rhyme did seem a bit forced and inconsistent sometimes, it worked well. I was ...

I really liked this song. Sounds like something from a Rise Against album. I loved the way it ended. I think songs do need to be a bit repetitive, and ...

This is probably the most different poem I've read in a while. And I loved every single bit of it. Probably because I myself write extremely self-contradictory pieces and sew ...

The first stanza set it all up very nicely. The rhyming was consistent, and the poem had a certain flow to it. Even though at some parts the rhyming lost ...