Hannah

Yer awesome. That is definitely the right name for the kingdom. xD

Oh my gosh, pay close attention to what Cailey says in the beginning of her review. A poem about Albania should at least evoke an image of it quickly! I'd ...

I don't want to change anything except the terrible beginning of the title. I hate the ol' "in which". But I'm so happy with this.

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I wanted to shy away from snow in the title since it's so prominent in the poem, and I always go for slanted titles, but it's up to you! Also, ...

And then what happened?

Ahaha! Congratulations on winning in the lyrics contest. I love the wobwobwob christmas!

Oh and I have to add that the first stanza, I feel, is entirely necessary to the second stanza, which is a continuation of the narration, so I wouldn't cut ...

Girl, I don't want any of this to change. You got me here.

thank you so much for taking the time to review my piece. you're cutting through everything i thought, "oh this is fine", and you're reminding me, "no! it's not fine! ...

thanks for your review, writtenlove! i wanted to keep the logical sentence progression of prose even though i had line breaks, so that's why i chose to lose a little ...

hmm, you're absolutely right that that line is over-explaining, Charlie. and your review has definitely given me a lot to think about concerning where this poem needs to be injected ...

haha, colons are really fun to use. i agree! thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem and leave a review. :)

Oh! One more thing! You write "worth" a lot when you mean "worse / worst", so pay attention! :)

The sun glimmered off the surface of the water like a ballerina, but assaulted my eyes like a charging bull. nope. not letting you pull that one. ooh, but thank ...